Thank you very much for your feedback. I am always happy to read what people think about my job. Although I have to admit that sometimes I read a long time after it was published because I'm busy with other things.
Once again thanks, always good to know that my effort is appreciated.
Well, just to answer your questions I'll tell you that you are right, the “large and ugly birds" that referred Mandora are Nightbird and Nightingale.
They will be the next victims of mind control of Slave-Girl Project.
I have not finished writing the script for the next episode, but your idea that Mandora enjoy your new slaves a little before setting that trap I think it's great

and I'll work on that.
Many of the pics I've posted as to which you refer to Shannon being a slave are just ideas that give me around in my head, I think this is the ideal ending for a villain like her or Mandora.
As for "Hypnotized Women" I have an idea for the second episode.
P.S. I've republished 74,75,76,79,80,81,82,83,85,89,92,93,95,96,99 and 100 pages of PSG IV because a fan of my job, pointed out a again, the large number of orthographic and grammatical errors that these pages were.
- Hypnoman