Night Moves

[Ghosthand]

The one main thing I noticed in this issue? Plastique is not a natural blonde

[Sumatra]

Hey Sumatra, don't hurry with resolution, yet. What about the third part next month? >.<
Other than that, I agree. Uzobono did a great job to make Northern Chill's sexy story even hotter
I can't wait for more dolls!

Fair enough. Wasn't meant that way lol. I can't wait either.

I'll add on that. Uzobono's work is better each issue. Looking at mainstream comics, the dialogue sets are well done, kudos on that. Lots of dialogue, easy on the eyes.

Read it again, a lot hotter reading one and two back to back, next issue can't come soon enough. Hope it tops the hundred page mark for an epic series.

-Sumatra

[Northern Chill]

Yes! Number three is on my top list! Thank you Northernchill for this superissue!!

first I would like to say how much I love you the world you have made in this, dolls maids those police! all are sexy, this issue was very detailed:

first the cover, is this Gallant Girl? Why is "Justina" looking at her like that? very deceptive.

Page 1. the start, Dylan Monroe is gloating in classic villain form.

Page 2. a new doll, she is hot, a geisha perhaps?

Page 3-8. The orgy, this is a tremndous way to start milking dolls and Justice Woman on the Dylans cock. when the master must go away she is so needy of him.

Page 9. a sign of his plans....

Page 10-11. the police? in Karo City? there is actual law here? is good to see Plastique in action she will never give up!

Page 12-13. a new side of Dylan, but his plans is foiled by Ms. Yang, and sector 23? is this important? her predecessor must have been dolled yes? possibly for not agreeing with her boss

Page 14. oh the hero, reduced to this yet she still recognizes in her mind her friend.

Page 15. how many maids does Dylan have?! this is a amazing house!

Page 16. Justice Woman comes back mental combat with Justina? this was a big point for myself, seeing her conflict is very nice.

Page 17. Even drones notice, she is in danger now but Justina will be beaten!

Page 18-19. Free!

Page 20. my Plastique! very cool effects, as we read in Uzobonos biograhy she uses "bubble" fields to lift her prey the Invisible Woman of fantastic 4 of Karo.

Page 21-22. A sad moment. they only want to help, this city is too bleak for them i think.

Page 23. Justice Woman, what do you see?!

Page 24. so Dylan dolls maids who do not clean, a true control villain what he cannot control he erases! and are all his maids so sexy?

Page 25. Gallant Girl! but why is she there?

Page 26. Why wont she speak? is this a mannequin? a statue? she was a doll only earlier? what happen?

page 27-30. 284, this is mark 1-2? Also with Gina doll find our heroine, but she is too strong for this, she is Justice she outsmarts simple dolls easy. the sex in the pages is top notch.

Page 31. a devious look. I am a fan of superheroines now making theyre own plots.

Page 32-33. But no! she is stopped? some fighting, who wins? no. Justice woman cannot be stopped by mere dolls.

Page 34-35. i cannot speak for these pages, they are very confusing is this the real ones? copies? are they controled? erased? very well done however. it is good to see them escaped.

Page 36. i like this dialogue, no matter what heroes are always detectives they must ever get to the truth!

Page 37-38. Plastique happy! its all i wanted she looks so good!

Page 39. at her home. and Anna doll from Silent Auction is here as her servant now?' though she does not treat her as object it seems, a warm greeting tells such.

Page 40. hothothot plastique!

Page 41. we see her addicted to milk more, poor Plastique but this does not seem to affect her outside so is ok. what is her % of conversion to doll? 2% now, 4%?

Page 42. Dylan. masterminding something, he sees Justice and Gallant are back but he doesn not worry? he has done something, I fear what.

was a tremenduos comic, I cannot say it enough, I only want number three NOW!!!

Thanks for the detailed feedback, Ms. Grey...Plastique's "conversion" could mean a multitude of things as her journey continues. As you'll see in the coming chapters, not everything is obvious for changes...

[Northern Chill]

The one main thing I noticed in this issue? Plastique is not a natural blonde

...only Anna knows the truth...for now...

[Northern Chill]

Hey Sumatra, don't hurry with resolution, yet. What about the third part next month? >.<
Other than that, I agree. Uzobono did a great job to make Northern Chill's sexy story even hotter
I can't wait for more dolls!

Fair enough. Wasn't meant that way lol. I can't wait either.

I'll add on that. Uzobono's work is better each issue. Looking at mainstream comics, the dialogue sets are well done, kudos on that. Lots of dialogue, easy on the eyes.

Read it again, a lot hotter reading one and two back to back, next issue can't come soon enough. Hope it tops the hundred page mark for an epic series.

-Sumatra

Thanks for the praise, Sumatra. I take some pride in writing dialog that makes for a good read and compliments great art such as what Uzobono has produced.

I can't say for certain what the page count will be in this arc but I'm hoping it'll be an entertaining read from beginning to end.

Northern Chill

[Champ]

The one main thing I noticed in this issue? Plastique is not a natural blonde

...only Anna knows the truth...for now...

You see...its remarks like this that make me coo coo for the next issue to come out. LOL

[Champ]

The one main thing I noticed in this issue? Plastique is not a natural blonde

...only Anna knows the truth...for now...

You see...its remarks like this that make me coo coo for the next issue to come out. LOL

[Northern Chill]

The one main thing I noticed in this issue? Plastique is not a natural blonde

...only Anna knows the truth...for now...

You see...its remarks like this that make me coo coo for the next issue to come out. LOL

I tend to tease/hint at events to come in many of my stories...tis my nature. Suffice to say, Plastique and her friends are going to encounter many dark and nefarious elements in Karo City in the updates ahead and some will affect them permanently...or perhaps already have... (cue twisted laugh)

[xarielx]

The one main thing I noticed in this issue? Plastique is not a natural blonde

...only Anna knows the truth...for now...

You see...its remarks like this that make me coo coo for the next issue to come out. LOL

I tend to tease/hint at events to come in many of my stories...tis my nature. Suffice to say, Plastique and her friends are going to encounter many dark and nefarious elements in Karo City in the updates ahead and some will affect them permanently...or perhaps already have... (cue twisted laugh)

It's this attention to detail that makes a good comic something special! Given the page length of this series so far, from issues one, we've learned that in this dystopic setting there are superheroines but they aren't treated any differently than anyone else. What I mean by this is referencing Uzo's "A Doll Day Afternoon", two normal women are made into the same dolls as Gallant Girl in issue one. That pushes a lot of the dark erotic buttons, as well as Plastique's extremely well done addiction plot! From Silent Auction to this issue she's devolved into a fiend lol, I hope we get to see a focus on that a bit more.

[Champ]

Now we must time warp to Sept. 11th so we may see the update!

[Ghosthand]

Now we must time warp to Sept. 11th so we may see the update!

It's just a step to the left...

[Northern Chill]

Now we must time warp to Sept. 11th so we may see the update!

It's just a step to the left...

Let's..do...the time warp....AGAIN!!!..(throwing burnt toast and rice at screen)...

Uzo is just starting to render the next part and it looks fantastic. Oh, this upcoming part will be a bit different than past chapters...as things settle down in some ways, they stir up in others....

[Champ]

Now we must time warp to Sept. 11th so we may see the update!

It's just a step to the left...

Let's..do...the time warp....AGAIN!!!..(throwing burnt toast and rice at screen)...

Uzo is just starting to render the next part and it looks fantastic. Oh, this upcoming part will be a bit different than past chapters...as things settle down in some ways, they stir up in others....

Gahhhhh! Don't make me wait til september!!!!!!!!!!

[Northern Chill]

Just letting you guys know that I'm working on dialoging the next update at present...ordinarily, it isn't something I'd announce but part 3 is hefty with a capital H....that, and researching dialog for the new...

Anyways, it'll be a great read, I hope...

Northern Chill

[Hector2]

Dear Northern Chill and Uzobono:

Night Moves 2 was a great read, but as someone pointed out, there is a little problem with continuity: Gallant girl became a sexdoll, not a mannequin… unless there is a trap, of course, and the Acumulator has other plans in mind…

However, the thing I liked the most it was to see Justice Woman free of her mental control and founding Gallant Girl mannequin and slowly despairing about a situation she cannot understand.

I would have loved to see the accumulator showing up and demanding something from her, or else Gallant Girl will be his prisoner forever, but your approach was great, because just after Justice Woman has abandoned all hope, two dolls show and try to comfort her, effectively making her situation a lot worse.

I think this comic rules and I am anxious to see # 3.