Night Moves

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Re: Night Moves

Postby msgrey » June 29th, 2012, 1:46 am

kakyo001 wrote:
Northern Chill wrote:Posted the cover for the next chapter here http://www.mccomix.com/gallery2/main.ph ... emId=49333 and I anticipate it will cause many a puzzled look for those who read the first part.

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my guess is, Gallant Girl's saved personality is transfered into one of those immobile dolls that can mimic the appearance of the victim (as seen in 'Specialized Shopping')... if she's allowed to keep her mind or if it's turned to mush like the minds of the 4 victims of the mentioned story remains to be seen... (if my guess is correct anyway :P)


I think the same, but mannequins have a bright look like plastic and no pupils this seems like maybe Gallant Girl escapes? Her mind was saved so it is possible.

it seems like she is posing not to get noticed by Justina who might be confused why one of Accumulators dolls or trophies looks like that. Hopefully they can both get out of this situation, there has to be a reason why Dylan, Accumulator is saving the heroines mind.
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Re: Night Moves

Postby Sumatra » June 29th, 2012, 10:29 am

Fucking hot story. Loved the heroines, even if they were brief. This gal Plastique better kick some ass, are we going to see Uzobono's characters from Haven's story or Shan and Tanya in Part 2?

I'd like that. Enjoyed it a lot, keep up the awesome job, the artwork is top notch. Date for Part 2?

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Re: Night Moves

Postby Northern Chill » June 29th, 2012, 11:17 am

Sumatra wrote:Fucking hot story. Loved the heroines, even if they were brief. This gal Plastique better kick some ass, are we going to see Uzobono's characters from Haven's story or Shan and Tanya in Part 2?

I'd like that. Enjoyed it a lot, keep up the awesome job, the artwork is top notch. Date for Part 2?

-Sumatra


August 7 will be the date for Night 1...as for who else appears before this arc ends, hard to say...there will be new people introed as characters start to get fleshed out..or otherwise... :twisted:
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Re: Night Moves

Postby msgrey » July 2nd, 2012, 1:49 am

there is a cover of Jennifer Annabell Maxwell and the Accumulator? coming soon. Is this Night Moves 1.5 Northernchill?

I think Im most excited about this story! All of youre Division stories are superb, I am counting the days!!
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Re: Night Moves

Postby Northern Chill » July 2nd, 2012, 9:20 am

msgrey wrote:there is a cover of Jennifer Annabell Maxwell and the Accumulator? coming soon. Is this Night Moves 1.5 Northernchill?

I think Im most excited about this story! All of youre Division stories are superb, I am counting the days!!


It's kinda Night 1.5 but Silent Auction stands alone from this arc for the most part..you'll see when Auction debuts next week.

Thanks for the kind words...I hope you enjoy what is to come!!

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Re: Night Moves

Postby bluemax2 » July 2nd, 2012, 10:03 am

Northern and Uzobono:
Love love this episode. It was fantastic. Especially the sanctimonious Jusctice Woman being reprogrammed into a fuck bunny. Yummy.
Please don't make her a bald doll, she's too good looking and usable. Keep her as a fuck bunny, maybe a domm working for the accumulator?
I'd love to see Plastique get a slow conversion to fucktoy or plaything but not bald doll, at least not immediatly.

Is Gallant Gal coming getting un-converted? Doesn't seem possible. She seems the perfect bald doll.

As I mentioned elsewhere I really enjoyed the pink phallic reprogrammer being used in different Uzobona episodes, especially the portable one that can be used on any woman, practically anywhere.
Very nice!

I do hope you keep this series going longer than two episodes. It would be great to see many different scenes of bondage and sex especially with different bondage toys and tools. More latex, corsets and even balletheels perhaps?

Keep up the great work both of you. What great immaginations you have!

regards,

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Re: Night Moves

Postby Ghosthand » July 2nd, 2012, 10:41 am

Personally I love the bald pleasure dolls, they are totally perfect! Each one almost exactly the same as the last. Their personality, mind, identity totally erased. Nothing but a synthetic toy. I'm sure that whoever buys them will want to personalise their toy at some time with maybe a wig of their chosing, some specialised programming, or clothing but right off the showroom floor the dolls are just the way they should be, blank.
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Re: Night Moves

Postby Northern Chill » July 2nd, 2012, 3:28 pm

Thanks bluemax2....originally, I had only planned Night Moves to be a relatively short arc but I've been brainstorming with Uzo and think we can have a lot of fun at whatever length it turns out to be.

Hi Ghosthand...originally, I wasn't sure that this type of doll mc would go over positively with the members here. I'm glad it has judging by the feedback here (and Uzo's phenomenal art helps) and I hope you enjoy what is to come.

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Re: Night Moves

Postby Northern Chill » July 4th, 2012, 4:18 pm

Just noting here that due to vacation by staff, dates have been moved up by a week...Silent Auction now debuts July 17 and Night Moves 2 on August 14. I've seen early renders for both and all I can say is it'll be worth the wait...

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Re: Night Moves

Postby Sumatra » July 4th, 2012, 11:29 pm

Boo. I want them both now! jk

I can't wait Northern! Some more f/f stuff coming up? Loving Gallant Girl on the cover, her look is priceless.

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Re: Night Moves

Postby Northern Chill » July 5th, 2012, 12:03 pm

Sumatra wrote:Boo. I want them both now! jk

I can't wait Northern! Some more f/f stuff coming up? Loving Gallant Girl on the cover, her look is priceless.

-Sumatra


I think I can safely say that the heat will continue in both upcoming updates as the story unfolds and new characters come to the forefront.

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Re: Night Moves

Postby Hector2 » July 16th, 2012, 10:05 pm

Hi there Northern Chill and Uzobono!

I loved your deconstruction of the Superhero as Good Samaritan: Poor Plastique could never get on time and now her friends are captured.

The part about the Accumulator setting a trap for Justice Woman and Gallant Girl was great! I just love when a villain really wins, manages to capture the superheroines and then leaves without leaving any clue (well, except Justice Woman’s uniform).

And then, Justice Woman conversion into a maid? Great!

The dolls are still a little creepy for my tastes, but I think this storyline has a lot of promise. However, given that Caro City seems a place where anything that could be wrong will go horribly wrong, I really hope Plastique could get a happy ending, however difficult that seems to be.
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Re: Night Moves

Postby Northern Chill » July 19th, 2012, 6:12 pm

Hector2 wrote:Hi there Northern Chill and Uzobono!

I loved your deconstruction of the Superhero as Good Samaritan: Poor Plastique could never get on time and now her friends are captured.

The part about the Accumulator setting a trap for Justice Woman and Gallant Girl was great! I just love when a villain really wins, manages to capture the superheroines and then leaves without leaving any clue (well, except Justice Woman’s uniform).

And then, Justice Woman conversion into a maid? Great!

The dolls are still a little creepy for my tastes, but I think this storyline has a lot of promise. However, given that Caro City seems a place where anything that could be wrong will go horribly wrong, I really hope Plastique could get a happy ending, however difficult that seems to be.



The story has a ways to go for the main participants and nothing is set in stone for their individual futures...

If you like JW's new role, methinks you'll like what lies ahead... :twisted:
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Re: Night Moves

Postby xarielx » July 21st, 2012, 1:34 pm

I really did enjoy this issue and, although the Accumulator was a little uninteresting, the compelling story kept me pushing onward. The coupling of a stereotypical duo and a stereotypical villain in this setting also proves to be an excellent combination, while you expect them to lose, the fact that he turned Justice Woman into a maid and not a doll is I think important, hence the second cover? There did seem to be a frustrating bit of dialogue, like why does the Accumulator make his maid a doll? It seemed random, but Justice Woman's conversion into his maid was a dream come true. I'm sure the second issue will be even better, that cover alone raises a lot of questions personally for such a short story lol.
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Re: Night Moves

Postby Northern Chill » July 22nd, 2012, 7:13 pm

xarielx wrote:I really did enjoy this issue and, although the Accumulator was a little uninteresting, the compelling story kept me pushing onward. The coupling of a stereotypical duo and a stereotypical villain in this setting also proves to be an excellent combination, while you expect them to lose, the fact that he turned Justice Woman into a maid and not a doll is I think important, hence the second cover? There did seem to be a frustrating bit of dialogue, like why does the Accumulator make his maid a doll? It seemed random, but Justice Woman's conversion into his maid was a dream come true. I'm sure the second issue will be even better, that cover alone raises a lot of questions personally for such a short story lol.


Hi Xarielx...glad you liked the opening chapter. As to why Gina was changed to a doll just as Justice Woman was becoming a maid, that gets revealed in the coming chapters...

As I've mentioned elsewhere, the original plan was this to be a short 2 part arc..but Uzo and I have hashed out some exciting ideas that flesh out characters you've just met as well as introduce others that play a role in the metropolis of Karo City.I hope you enjoy what is to come in this arc....:)

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