MCcomix Presents The Birthday Present Pt.1

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MCcomix Presents The Birthday Present Pt.1

Postby MCComix Presents » April 8th, 2010, 7:33 am

Hans and Opal are a live-in couple living ordinary lives. Feeling their relationship has reached a certain point of trust, Hans reveals a secret he has never revealed to anyone before - he is a hypnofetishist! And what's more, as a special birthday treat, he requests that his amateur actor girlfriend role play for him.
Will Opal accept this strange offer? You already know the answer!

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Re: MCcomix Presents The Birthday Present Pt.1

Postby tomcat » April 8th, 2010, 2:29 pm

This is going to be awesome... ^.^
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Re: MCcomix Presents The Birthday Present Pt.1

Postby Akonkid » April 8th, 2010, 6:51 pm

Dear MCcomix Presents,
This story seems eerily familiar... Wait...How did you get a hold of my journal? Or did Trish tell you about my birthday present from last year? That little minx could never keep her mouth shut... Nevermind. Ignore that and carry on. I have a naughty girlfriend to spank.
If she would just do what I asked, I wouldn't need to use mind control!
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Re: MCcomix Presents The Birthday Present Pt.1

Postby Doctor Robo » April 8th, 2010, 8:20 pm

That's one of the most creative MC comics or stories I have ever seen - and I've seen a lot. Great job! I'm looking forward to part two!

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Re: MCcomix Presents The Birthday Present Pt.1

Postby GrimTidings » April 8th, 2010, 11:33 pm

She's feisty. She's smart. She's cute. She's in for it for sure considering where this story's happening.

Nice use of the frame with in the frame. Really looking forward to what happens next!

(edit: and, on my second re-read, is it sad that I'm really hoping she ends up cooking him something just because? Really nice work setting up her character - and her dominance in the relationship so the reversal is that much more... powerful.)
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