Thank you for the suggestions - yup, the dialogue on the fifth page is an old version, the pages got mixed up somehow.
The "finger" on the ninth page is actually the man's foot. Now that I look at it, it does look a bit weird, but it is not anatomically impossible - he could have put this foot just behind her butt. Anyway, it cannot be fixed until Nezit comes back from the trip
Thanks for being so perceptive