by jrhcl2 » April 24th, 2015, 6:37 pm
Hello Mr. Cryptic!! Interesting installment!! First I was wondering how the Buzzard was going to keep Ishtar from breaking those chains, you hinted that if they were regular chains she could break them easily. Leading me to believe there was more to those chains than meets these eyes. But there really wasn't more to those chains, it was the orgone energy that was making her weak and keeping her from focusing. Is that something new? I don't remember orgone energy every being used, this is the first time I've heard of it! There was another thing that caught me by surprised, Ishtar thinking of Paul and saying his name and snaping one of the chains. I have been wondering what kind of effect Ishtar sleeping with Paul would have on her. I mean she was so concern about having sex with him at the beginning of the Prospero saga, she even stated she want to but couldn't, fearing she would lose herself to him. Making it seem like he would have some of kind hold on her!! Ishtar saying his name seem to make her focus. That something I'd like to see explored, how deep and strong is Paul hold on her?? His hold on her isn't something she trying to fight, she love the guy!
I know, I've said in the past that I'm not really into criminals mind controlling heroines or watching the heroines losing most of the time, (I'm not!) Over the years what has kept my interested is the sexy outfits the heroines wear, i have learned to deal with them having sex with their enemies to a point! ( I will always prefer the heroines have sex with a person of their own free will), not being mind controlled, that always take a lot of these enjoyment out of the scene for me!! One thing over the years I have always enjoyed is the relationship between Ishtar and Paul Barnes! To tell the truth their relationship is the thing that keep me coming back for more!! If I haven't said this before, i loved the way you slowly developed and revealed more and more about their relationship. When they finally got together, I was really happy for Ishtar!! I hope you continue to have stories that focus on them building a strong relationship!! It's the thing I most enjoy!! Just saw the cover for the next installment. Looking at the cover I have not idea where Ishtar is?? Is she at home sitting in a chair tanning or is she enslaved on the island of the villains? I hope Ishtar doesn't being come his slave!! He's had his moment with that darn squawk box, chaining her and using that orgone energy on her!! it's time for some payback!!!