The Robots of Doctor Pretorius!

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The Robots of Doctor Pretorius!

Postby Mr. Cryptic » November 20th, 2014, 10:15 pm

Doctor Pretorius has sent an army of androids to steal a shipment of valuable computer parts, but they are intercepted by the bikini-clad She-Hercules called Brickhouse!
Brickhouse is mighty, but can even she take on an army of relentless robots, as well as the mind control technology of Doctor Pretorius!?
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Re: The Robots of Doctor Pretorius!

Postby Mr. Cryptic » December 4th, 2014, 10:00 pm

Brickhouse has been captured and taken aboard Dr. Pretorius' aircraft!
She is one of Earth's mightiest heroines, but in a stupor under his hypnotic drug and bound in a massive rack, she struggles to break free!
Will Dr. Pretorius break her will with his insidious mind control technology before she can break free!?
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Re: The Robots of Doctor Pretorius!

Postby Mr. Cryptic » December 17th, 2014, 11:20 pm

Subjected to the erotic torture of Dr. Pretorius, the mighty heroine Brickhouse's will is broken and she becomes his submissive slave!
He has much planned for the sexy female Hercules!
See it in Victory City #63, the Robots of Doctor Pretorius: Part III, in the MC Comix Member's Area now!

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Re: The Robots of Doctor Pretorius!

Postby Mr. Cryptic » May 21st, 2015, 3:33 pm

Doctor Pretorius has brainwashed the sexy heroine Brichhouse to be an obedient fembot!
She now serves the criminal scientest as a robotic huntress, programmed to capture more superheroines!
See it in The Robots of Doctor Pretorius: Part IV, in the MC Comix Member's section, now!

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Re: The Robots of Doctor Pretorius!

Postby Mr. Cryptic » June 3rd, 2015, 10:41 pm

Doctor Pretorius has succeeded in capturing the heroines Brickhouse, Pitbull, and Sonic Siren and turning them into his fembots!
But, while he indulges himself on Brickhouse's tight, sexy body, another heroine is in pursuit!
See it in The Robots of Doctor Pretorius: Part V, in the MC Comix Member's Area now!

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Re: The Robots of Doctor Pretorius!

Postby Mr. Cryptic » June 17th, 2015, 9:52 pm

Doctor Pretorius continues to convert heroines into his robot slaves!
Can even the mighty Ishtar stop him!?
The Robots of Doctor Pretorius: Part VI, in the MC Comix Member's Area, now!

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Re: The Robots of Doctor Pretorius!

Postby Mr. Cryptic » July 2nd, 2015, 11:50 pm

Doctor Pretorius uses his hypnotic drug and the seductive skills of Brickhouse to overpower the will of the sexy heroine goddess, Ishtar!
Will he succeed!?
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Re: The Robots of Doctor Pretorius!

Postby Mr. Cryptic » July 31st, 2015, 5:00 am

Doctor Pretorius has captured Brickhouse, Pitbull, Sonic Siren, and now Ishtar!
What are his plans for the sexy goddess!?
Find out in The Robots of Doctor Pretorius: Part VIII, in the MC Comix Member's Area now!

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Re: The Robots of Doctor Pretorius!

Postby Mr. Cryptic » September 18th, 2015, 11:09 pm

Aboard Dr. Pretorius' command ship, Ishtar and Brickhouse are the criminal mastermind's helpless sex robots, whose powers he makes use of for his own pleasure, and theirs!
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Re: The Robots of Doctor Pretorius!

Postby bluemax2 » September 22nd, 2015, 8:20 am

Mr. cryptic,
I loved this episode. The floating BJs and spinning is very sexy. The expressions on Ishtar's face are even sexier. Very nice!
The whole lack of control and enslavemr of these two is what makes the story.
Have you thought of now having these two capture other heroines and even regular women for the good Dr.?
What about dressing them in latex body suits, shaving their heads and having them wear ballet boots?

Just an idea....


Keep up the great work.


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Re: The Robots of Doctor Pretorius!

Postby jrhcl2 » September 22nd, 2015, 7:54 pm

Hello Mr. Cryptic!! The girls look hot!! But I have to say I'm not into the group sex thing. I hope you don't shave the girls heads that not a good look for Ishtar or Brickhouse!!But to each his own. Let me ask you a question?? I remember maybe a years or two ago you were thinking about doing a story where a heroine was mind controlling a villain. I think that would be a nice change of pace!! I'd like to see the heroines finally have the upper hand! Take the fight to the villains, have them on the ropes for once!! Even invade and take over the island of the villains like the villains have done so many times to Victory city!! It look like it going to happen AGAIN! Using the so called protector of Victory City to do it !! Why couldn't it be these other way around the heroes take over the island of the villains?? You keep telling me these are stories about mind control, why can't the heroes mind control the villains too?? The site is a mind control site and it feature mind control, but it doesn't say only the heroes can be mind controlled!!
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Re: The Robots of Doctor Pretorius!

Postby Mr. Cryptic » September 23rd, 2015, 2:44 am

jrhcl2 wrote:The girls look hot!! But I have to say I'm not into the group sex thing.


Neither am I. Dr. Pretorius is kind of wallowing in being an evil villain right now.

jrhcl2 wrote:I hope you don't shave the girls heads that not a good look for Ishtar or Brickhouse!


Shave their heads!? Why would Dr. Pretorius do that?

jrhcl2 wrote:. Let me ask you a question?? I remember maybe a years or two ago you were thinking about doing a story where a heroine was mind controlling a villain. I think that would be a nice change of pace!! I'd like to see the heroines finally have the upper hand! Take the fight to the villains, have them on the ropes for once!! Even invade and take over the island of the villains like the villains have done so many times to Victory city!! It look like it going to happen AGAIN! Using the so called protector of Victory City to do it !! Why couldn't it be these other way around the heroes take over the island of the villains?? You keep telling these are stories about mind control, why can't the heroes mind control the villains too?? The site is a mind control site and it feature mind control, but it doesn't say only the heroes can be mind controlled!!


Stay tuned. This story is still developing :) .
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Re: The Robots of Doctor Pretorius!

Postby Mr. Cryptic » October 27th, 2015, 3:37 am

Ishtar and Brickhouse are under Dr. Pretorius' complete comtrol!
They happily serve him sexually as his obedient fembots!
But...a long awaited revelation is coming!
See it in Victory City #70, in the HIP Comix Member's Area now!

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Re: The Robots of Doctor Pretorius!

Postby madcurse » October 27th, 2015, 6:46 am

Great Chapter! And that revelation... Yes, Finally. It's about freaking time!!! :D
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Re: The Robots of Doctor Pretorius!

Postby jrhcl2 » October 28th, 2015, 5:51 pm

Hello Mr. Cryptic!! Very clever! That's the smartest thing Ishtar has every done in the 3 plus years I've been following her adventures. She's has aways been shown to be slow to react and not a quick thinker!! That was very clever!! It's also one of the few times Ishtar has spoken a magical spell! She mostly uses her magical garments which enhances her physical abilities, she really doesn't cast spells by speaking them by mouth! If I didn't know she was a sorceress a magic user, I wouldn't think Ishtar was a sorceress because she rarely cast spells by speaking them by mouth. Ishtar is a different kind of sorceress!!
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