Brickhouse's Adventures in Malanga City!

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Re: Brickhouse's Adventures in Malanga City!

Postby Mr. Cryptic » February 13th, 2014, 10:15 pm

It's pretty obvious that I like buff, fit, muscular women. Fitness and figure models are what I have in mind when I design characters. I also like female bodybuilders, but only when they're off season and have their normal fat and natural curves. I don't find skinny fashion models particularly attractive.

Sonic Siren was inspired by Christina Aguilera, and so her body is similar. Shapely but not buff.

Ocelot Woman is BC's character. I modeled her look on what I visualized her to look like in BC's stories.
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Re: Brickhouse's Adventures in Malanga City!

Postby Mr. Cryptic » February 13th, 2014, 10:20 pm

While Brickhouse and Rocksolid Rhonda serve the Gangster of Love as his devoted love slaves, Rhiannon and Doctor Pretorius are up to their own tricks!
Rhiannon sends Pretorius to capture a buxom young Amazon named Aleesha!
Will she fall prey to the criminal inventor!?
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Re: Brickhouse's Adventures in Malanga City!

Postby jrhcl2 » February 15th, 2014, 8:24 pm

Mr. Cryptic wrote: Ocelot Woman is BC's character. I modeled her look on what I visualized her to look like in BC's stories.

Ocelot woman is character I've wondered about?? Meaning, you shown her fighting, being enslaved!! She has been in many sexual situation, but you have never really shown her having sex with anyone, like with your own characters. Are you limited on what you can do with Ocelot woman??
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Re: Brickhouse's Adventures in Malanga City!

Postby Mr. Cryptic » February 18th, 2014, 10:07 pm

In BC's stories, Ocelot Woman gets sexually stimulated a lot, but doesn't have sex except with her husband, so that's how I portray her in my stories as well.
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Re: Brickhouse's Adventures in Malanga City!

Postby Mr. Cryptic » February 27th, 2014, 11:28 am

Candice Carlson came to Malanga, the "City of Supervillains," searching for her husband, Ron!
She doesn't know that her husband is also the mind controlling villain known as Doctor Pretorius!
Almost immediately after arriving, she was captured and enslaved by the Gangster of Love!
Now, in the guise of the villainess Muscle Goddess, she's been commanded to retrieve him for her master!
But the sorceress who has captured Doctor Pretorius has a slave of her own, the mighty Amazon named Aleesha!
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Re: Brickhouse's Adventures in Malanga City!

Postby jrhcl2 » February 28th, 2014, 7:55 pm

Hello! Mr. Cryptic. Interesting developments! Looking forward to the next installment. I know your going to say these are stories about mind controlling heroines! But i do wonder why you named the city of the heroines Victory city?? The Heroines lose a awful lot, I mean the city has been lost to the villains twice already, too Ultra and Prospero! And why are the heroines looked at in such a positive light by the people of the city?? The first American Goddess inability to overcome a everyday thug with no powers, caused a city to be attacked, and some people had billion of dollars stolen from them. What would the people think if they knew it was Ishtar that provided Prospero with the knowledge he needed to gain greater magical powers, which he used to overthrow the city!! The people also saw their heroes attacking them and aiding the villains to enslave their fair city!! Why is the City of the heroines called Victory City?? Why are the heroines thought of in a positive light and trusted by the people of the city?? :?: :?:
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Re: Brickhouse's Adventures in Malanga City!

Postby Mr. Cryptic » March 1st, 2014, 1:03 am

Both times that Victory City was conquered, the villains that conquered were defeated in the end.

Victory City is on an interdimensional rift that makes it vulnerable to Malanga City and other threats. The city is basically on the verge of being overrun by villains all the time, and it's only because of the heroes that protect it that it has stayed free of supervillain domination.
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Re: Brickhouse's Adventures in Malanga City!

Postby jrhcl2 » March 2nd, 2014, 9:53 am

Mr. Cryptic wrote:Both times that Victory City was conquered, the villains that conquered were defeated in the end.

Victory City is on an interdimensional rift that makes it vulnerable to Malanga City and other threats. The city is basically on the verge of being overrun by villains all the time, and it's only because of the heroes that protect it that it has stayed free of supervillain domination.


Good answer!! I just wanted to get a idea on how you see the Heroines and Victory City. I know a lot times the reader will see the story or the heroine different than the artist intended. For me, I know your going to say these are stories about mind controlling heroines. That being said, In the short scenes when you show how powerful, smart, or skilled the heroines are, a comment will be made that the heroines are very powerful or have vast powers or can anything challenge the heroines. I don't know if it was your intention, as least I don't think so, but a lot times the heroines don't come out looking very smart or very skilled at being heroines, meaning they don't seem very skilled at their craft. Most of the time the villains have no superpowers or they are a lot less powerful than the heroines, but they always beat the more powerful heroines. As Least for me it has been hard to think of the heroines as being smart or skilled, prime examples being Ishtar and Brickhouse both are very powerful. But they always lose to lesser foes. It seems that most of the time they both have the power to overcome the villain, but their lack of skill or lack of smarts, leads to their enslavement by a lesser foe. I only asked those questions from the last comments I posted to get your view on how you see your heroes. Your stories are really good and the artwork is very good, but the villains are so much more skilled at using their limited powers or the tech they have, the villains are much smarting than the heroes, the villains are very skilled at their craft, but i struggle with seeing these heroines as being very competent. :!: :?:
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Re: Brickhouse's Adventures in Malanga City!

Postby Mr. Cryptic » April 9th, 2014, 11:17 pm

Under the Gangster of Love's spell, Brickhouse (Candice Carlson) has been made to adopt the villainess identity of Muscle Goddess and serve him as a minion!
Teamed up with the villainess Rocksolid Rhonda, she has been sent to break into the sorceress Rhiannon's hideout and recover her slave, Dr. Pretorius!
Rhiannon's other slave is the buff and busty Amazon named Aleesha, who use her magic to entrance Candice and Rhonda!
Whichever villain wins, the heroes lose!
Will Candice ever escape her bondage in the City of Supervillains!?
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Re: Brickhouse's Adventures in Malanga City!

Postby Mr. Cryptic » April 23rd, 2014, 7:38 pm

Candice Carlson was the Gangster of Love's slave, but now under the power of the insidious hypnomask, she obeys only Dr. Pretorius!
What will Candice have to do to please her new master!?
And who is stalking the young sorceress Rhiannon within her stronghold?
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Re: Brickhouse's Adventures in Malanga City!

Postby Mr. Cryptic » May 7th, 2014, 10:51 pm

Brickhouse is now the sex slave of Dr. Pretorius!
Will he discover her true identity!?
What does the Gangster of Love have in store for his rival in villainy, the sexy sorceress, Rhiannon?
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Re: Brickhouse's Adventures in Malanga City!

Postby Mr. Cryptic » May 23rd, 2014, 2:12 am

Candice and Ron Carlson are an unusual couple! Ron knows Candice is an internet fitness model (and occasional porn star), but he doesn't know that she's also the mighty heroine Brickhouse!
Candice knows that Ron is a brilliant engineer and technology consultant, but she doesn't know the real nature of his work! Ron is the master of technological mind control known as Doctor Pretorius!
What will happen now that Doctor Pretorius has been freed from bondage to the sorceress Rhiannon, and has Brickhouse under his complete hypnotic control!
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Re: Brickhouse's Adventures in Malanga City!

Postby jrhcl2 » June 18th, 2014, 6:35 pm

Hello Mr. Cryptic, It took a while for me to comment on the last installment of Brickhouse's Adventures in Malanga city, it's one of Brickhouse's best adventures!! Brickhouse is one of my favorite characters in your comics!! I like her power set. I like that she is super strong and invulnerable!! Even those Ishtar is my favorite Mr. Cryptic character, her power set is magical, since I'm into sports, Ishtar is like a player using performance enchancing drugs, while Brickhouse powers are natural, I like heroes who's super strength and invulnerability are natural, not enchanced by Magical garments like Ishtar and the American Goddess are, without their garments they have no super abilities. I do like Ishtar, the new American Goddess, Ocelot woman and Sonic Siren body types a lot better, they have more feminine lines. Brickhouse and pitbull are a bit to Musclular for me. I will say this story still didn't answer my question, why she is thought of as a great heroine or why her fellow heroines trust her. She hasn't shown she can over come a challenge!! She hasn't been able to break free of any form of mind control. She's just been a toy for all her foes, she been more help to the villains than she's has ever been to her fellow heroes!! This story was no different, she was a toy for the gangster of love as well as the Dr. !! Still liked the story!! But when will Brickhouse show us that she's a real hero, not a play toy for all the villains?? I also like the twist of the villains betraying each other instead of it always being the heroes.
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Re: Brickhouse's Adventures in Malanga City!

Postby Mr. Cryptic » June 23rd, 2014, 9:18 pm

jrhcl2 wrote: I will say this story still didn't answer my question, why she is thought of as a great heroine or why her fellow heroines trust her. She hasn't shown she can over come a challenge!! She hasn't been able to break free of any form of mind control. She's just been a toy for all her foes, she been more help to the villains than she's has ever been to her fellow heroes!! This story was no different, she was a toy for the gangster of love as well as the Dr. !! Still liked the story!! But when will Brickhouse show us that she's a real hero, not a play toy for all the villains?? I also like the twist of the villains betraying each other instead of it always being the heroes.


Brickhouse has very little resistance to mental attacks. She's very formidable when facing more physical foes. Sovereign made that point to her when he was testing her way back in Victory City #3-5. She does better in a team with someone to run interference against mind controllers.
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Re: Brickhouse's Adventures in Malanga City!

Postby jrhcl2 » June 25th, 2014, 8:30 am

Mr. Cryptic wrote:
jrhcl2 wrote: I will say this story still didn't answer my question, why she is thought of as a great heroine or why her fellow heroines trust her. She hasn't shown she can over come a challenge!! She hasn't been able to break free of any form of mind control. She's just been a toy for all her foes, she been more help to the villains than she's has ever been to her fellow heroes!! This story was no different, she was a toy for the gangster of love as well as the Dr. !! Still liked the story!! But when will Brickhouse show us that she's a real hero, not a play toy for all the villains?? I also like the twist of the villains betraying each other instead of it always being the heroes.


Brickhouse has very little resistance to mental attacks. She's very formidable when facing more physical foes. Sovereign made that point to her when he was testing her way back in Victory City #3-5. She does better in a team with someone to run interference against mind controllers.


You just made me think of that test, I asked the question how Ishtar abilities were measured and how Ishtar was thought too be on the same strength level as Brickhouse if Ishtar was wearing her Magical garments, Because the test wouldn't be a true measurement of Ishtar natural abilities if she wasn't nude like Brickhouse. You did answer my question. But you did make me think of this question?? When Sovereign tested Ishtar resistance to mental attacks, how did Ishtar do without her garments?? Since she wasn't able to resist Sovereign power when she was wearing her magical garments in the Ultra Maxima Saga.
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