by Hector2 » April 9th, 2011, 3:25 pm
Hi McTek!
I wish to comment about last issue. First of all, I liked how Alpha Woman was used to lure Snowflake into a trap. I also loved your emphasis in the despair Snowflake feels seeing his best friends transformed, but when her powers fail her, she doesn’t seem to pull much of a fight… I love when a villain destroy the last hope of an heroine, but then I loved the Battle in the center of Snowflake’s mind. The concept of his two sides seeing Kyla encased on ice is great!
Ideal and Core? Great names! And I also really hope this is not The End… because we need to finish this tale, somehow… But I want to say some more things.
First of all, I want to tell you that this is not a critic. I enjoy the work of all the artist at this and the hip comix site, and more than that, I myself had never done any artistic in my life. So I only trying to give you a humble opinion. If I ever write something that sounds condescending, I sincerely ask for your forgiveness.
Said that, I think you could enhance your composition. Let’s see: Sometimes I see that the characters are a little small given the background they are. This would not be a problem, but I will love to see the characters being as big as possible. That is to say, if you have two gorgeous women in a panel, I would like to see the most of them.
Then, at page 9, we have Snowflake trying to attack their robotized friends. His face is amazing, but then your sound effects are imposed over her hands, and your box caption (Is this the correct terminology?) are covering her body. You could have put in any other place (there is a lot of them in the picture) and so we could have a better view of her.
The same could be said of page 11. And then, I just love when an heroine is encased on ice, amber, plastic, you name it. It’s one of my favorite fetishes. But I wish you have show us Snowflake encased of ice in a bigger perspective, I think the perspective you did was not full view.
I really hope you could do a full view of Snowflake encased on ice, and once again I apologize if any of my writing bother you, I only want to give some positive critic.
Thanks for all your work
Hector 2