Hector2 wrote:Hi there Dumbtime!
Thanks for the pm! It explained a loooooot of things, but I am curious about how will you explain all that in the comics!
Well, to tell you the truth, I think the goddess here is a Deux Ex Machina, but certainly I am grateful for that! Digitalus is such a smug snake that I was looking desperately for some way the princess would reject the brainwashing...
I really hope things could get better for her, but I think she is doomed by your own canon.
Great story! It was very sexy
She may be 'doomed' in this part of the arc but is she 'doomed' forever? There is a curse on her so, again, only time will tell.
Hector2 wrote:Dear Dumbtime:
After all you have wrote, the only thing I really got was that American Amazon was cursed… and only seeing Lady Arieta stripping her of her identity as a warrior I understand why.
It was very depressing seeing your story, but now seeing this last chapter, is depressing in the sense of a greek tragedy: Pathos and Bathos and all those things… sure, the heroine will fall, but now we understand how great the fall is.
This is really a tragic tale, congratulations Dumbtime.
PD I hope Lady Arieta could come back with help fast, your heroine doesn’t deserve everything that happens to her.
controlfan wrote:this story didn't really seem to properly follow the last chapter
mns_95125 wrote:It made sense to me.
The structure is a bit complex, though, with multiple levels. There are events in the real world, events in AA's mind, and events in what I take to be AA's 'core' or deepest self-image. (Where she had the conversation with Arete.) I can see how that could be confusing.
Hector2 wrote:Dear Dumbtime:
At long last, Digitalus has triumphed. It was a sad thing to see AA fall, but it was a foregone conclusion.
I really hope she could shake this mind control, but I fear that would be in the far future
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