Ghosthand wrote:Ok, I'm starting to put some pieces together here. As always this is just my wild imagination formulating what might be going on.
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So, here is my wild conclusion, Madam Mynx and Apex have been working on reverse engineering the nanodoll transformation. Marvin has made a program to reprogram the vicim. Mikey and J.T. are testing the nanobots and program before Madam Mynx unveils it in her new beauty salon. Although she hasn't started to change just yet (she was just exposed at the end of the last chapter) Renee is doomed to be the first of a new line of nanodolls
I could be all wrong but man I hope not
bluemax2 wrote:Trishbot:
I'm really enjoying where this story is going. And now that we see what's coming in the previews, wow!
I can't wait.
Can't we see them sooner?
Perhaps a few work in progress pictures?
Especially of the plasticized drone doll.
Hector2 wrote:Dear Trishbot:
The New Toy # 2 is a great issue, but I still don’t get it… the surprise x had was about she doesn’t remembering how to use her new toy, or the new toy did something to her?
Anyway, the thought of T.J and Tezuka spying on unsuspecting “clients” to enslave them (I hope) it’s so sexy, congratulations!
I think Ghosthand has a lot of good points. The story will tell us if he is right or wrong…
Trishbot wrote:Glad to see you all speculating and liking it thus far!Ghosthand wrote:Ok, I'm starting to put some pieces together here. As always this is just my wild imagination formulating what might be going on.
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So, here is my wild conclusion, Madam Mynx and Apex have been working on reverse engineering the nanodoll transformation. Marvin has made a program to reprogram the vicim. Mikey and J.T. are testing the nanobots and program before Madam Mynx unveils it in her new beauty salon. Although she hasn't started to change just yet (she was just exposed at the end of the last chapter) Renee is doomed to be the first of a new line of nanodolls
I could be all wrong but man I hope not
I don't know. That new cover... does that look like a nanodoll? Nah... couldn't be...bluemax2 wrote:Trishbot:
I'm really enjoying where this story is going. And now that we see what's coming in the previews, wow!
I can't wait.
Can't we see them sooner?
Perhaps a few work in progress pictures?
Especially of the plasticized drone doll.
I may have a few concepts lying around I could upload to tie you all over... if there's enough interest.Hector2 wrote:Dear Trishbot:
The New Toy # 2 is a great issue, but I still don’t get it… the surprise x had was about she doesn’t remembering how to use her new toy, or the new toy did something to her?
Anyway, the thought of T.J and Tezuka spying on unsuspecting “clients” to enslave them (I hope) it’s so sexy, congratulations!
I think Ghosthand has a lot of good points. The story will tell us if he is right or wrong…
I think it's safe to say Renee did NOT expect her toy to come with a "squirting" feature. That wasn't labelled on the box... But what did it squirt into her? Nothing TOO bad, I hope.
fools_page wrote:I like where the story is going (the mention of a "control device" being attached), which as Ghosthand suggests seems to imply a prototype. I agree the technology is almost certainly based on The Ringmistress' technology, and that Renee is an early sample of a new product line out of Apex, which certainly corresponds with the title of the series as a whole. I like the mention of "Terra," which I believe - I may be mistaken - The Ringmisstress' true identity.
Callbacks to continuity always impress me.
That said, I admit to ignorance. "Pete and Polly"?
The artwork is fantastic. Dr. Robo's story is excellent as well, hitting many fetish buttons.
Looking forward to a next installment.
fools_page
leto17 wrote:One of the things that makes your stories effective is a good balance between story, characterization, lucious female designs, excellent and well conceived mind control events and methods, and hot sexual encounters. For the story, the telling is brief yet effective, for characterization we are effectively and parsimonously provided with the personalities that are to be subjugated, and I like your character designs as I find them to have their own distinctive style in terms of being cute, cuddly, sensual, and hot!
Again, I know Doctor Robo does fantastic work, and I will do one of these for him as well.
The mind control events and finished products are also excellent. For example.I really love the nanodoll design in general, but I find your variant with Renee to be the sexiest by far I have seen. I also love the frozen stiffened aspect of her body. The title page for episode 4 just blew me away. Your use of drones in other stories like Convert Another is also effective, and on and on and on...
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