Trishbot:
Can't wait to see it.
Just love the alien mind control.
regards,
bluemax
fools_page wrote:I enjoyed the story, especially the last chapter which provided the new heroine Lunaria's background. The Randar aliens were engaging, both in the way they initially enslave a subject but then have to perform some form of modification to make the control permanent. The "blank-eyed" look of the enslaved alt. aliens (neither Lunaria's race nor the Randar) was quite effective.
fools_page wrote:The character's introduction, too, is a good one, filling an element into MCComix I haven't seen a great deal of, i.e., the alien presence soon often seen in mainstream comics. Lots of character potential there, including, of course, the eventual return of the enslaving aliens and the threat they pose to Earth.
A good story.
fools_page
Trishbot wrote:I think she's going to be LOADS of fun to use... One thing I didn't really get the time to share in this story is Lunaria's people had MUCH different views about sex... and I think you'll see how she feels about it when she starts bumping into some of Metrobay's hotter heroines...
Tecknophyle wrote:Trishbot wrote:I think she's going to be LOADS of fun to use... One thing I didn't really get the time to share in this story is Lunaria's people had MUCH different views about sex... and I think you'll see how she feels about it when she starts bumping into some of Metrobay's hotter heroines...
She has a different view about sex than the people in Metrobay? So, her planet was one of uptight prudes? She will stand out in Metrobay!
Trishbot wrote:I think she's going to be LOADS of fun to use... One thing I didn't really get the time to share in this story is Lunaria's people had MUCH different views about sex... and I think you'll see how she feels about it when she starts bumping into some of Metrobay's hotter heroines...
fools_page wrote:She also has the potential for much pathos. The last chapter describes how she was captured by her own mother, reduced to a "cattle husk." If I have a criticism of the story, it is that too little time was spent on this element . . . Lunaria's adaptation to Earth seems rushed, in this sense. On the other hand, that is not the intent of the story - it is erotica, after all - and I can see why you wouldn't want to focus on it too much, at least at this early stage.
So, getting back to pathos . . . much potential. This is a character who has lost her entire world, seen every person she has ever known reduced to slavery. If that doesn't fit the role of a angst-ridden heroine, I can't think of what would.
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