A very hot and spicy chapter to this deepening serial. Some specific thoughts:
1)On page 47, when Leo offers his dick to Valient Grrl as a banana for her monkey state, I wonder if it crossed his mind that monkeys tend to eat bananas one piece at a time? That could have been a very painful lesson for Leo....
2) A general thought: I really think thrallium is getting overused as a plot device in all Metrobay based stories. I know it looks great in art and is very handy for the mind control element but seeing it crop up in nearly every tale reminds me a bit of Superman writers overindulging in bringing kryptonite into comic stories of the 60's and 70's. Personally, either expand what thrallium can do beyond MC (physical tf , side effects, instability in large quantities) or dial back the usage a bit, imo.
3) Great art in this serial....Akonkid's version of VG is different than Finister but no less alluring. She's never looked more ripped, for certain.
I'm eagerly looking forward to seeing what happens in future chapters..keep up the great work..
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