Hi there AkonKid:
Only now I am noticing that your writing is very good at comedy! I’m always distracted by the MC control, the action and other topics of super heroines comics, but I must confess that this series had a lot of humor, and very good gags!
And about your characterization: Gorilla Gall is the only superheroine thus far that doesn’t act like a drama queen: truly, the new Duality Dame and Ms. Universe had being through a lot in the last weeks, but they are letting that interfere with their performance at the job, and that could be dangerous. Gorilla Gal is cheerful enough to throw Golden Girl away.
I loved page 100, why does every villain have a million dollar secret lair with hallways that look the fucking same? Well, we can talk about standardization or the old “abandoned warehouse” plot, but it really because reusing the scenery is cheaper.
My favorite part are the last pages. The fight between Ms. Universe and Ada is very well choreographed (is that the term?). There are deep, philosophical questions (Is a human intrinsically superior to a machine? Or Viceversa) and there are really clever surprises (Who would have tought Madam Machine could built a robot very similar to MECHANA, even in the absorbing energy type? Is she a better sciencist that Belinda Giolla?
However, everything takes a second place to the incredibly hot part when ADA kiss a powerless Ms. Universe, and then carry her on to see her mistress. It’s very well done, and it’s my favorite part, and I hope you can include a lot of moments like that in your series.
Thanks for another well done job.
Hector.