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MTech

PostPosted: September 10th, 2009, 9:40 pm
by madcap
Battlestrength, this one has a lot of potential, and you've certainly ended the first installment leaving me excited to see what's next! That last panel is just awesome with the girl bound in the chair with the eye beams shooting directly into her face. Well done! (Though I do hope you pay a little more mind to grammar...picky I know, but it kind of throws me out of the story for a sec when something is off!)

Re: MTech

PostPosted: September 17th, 2009, 12:42 pm
by battlestrength
Hi,

Sorry, I'll try and get better... let me know where im falling over. I'm always interested in feedback. :D

Kind regards,

Lee