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MCcomix Presents The Birthday Present Pt.1

PostPosted: April 8th, 2010, 7:33 am
by MCComix Presents
Hans and Opal are a live-in couple living ordinary lives. Feeling their relationship has reached a certain point of trust, Hans reveals a secret he has never revealed to anyone before - he is a hypnofetishist! And what's more, as a special birthday treat, he requests that his amateur actor girlfriend role play for him.
Will Opal accept this strange offer? You already know the answer!

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Re: MCcomix Presents The Birthday Present Pt.1

PostPosted: April 8th, 2010, 2:29 pm
by tomcat
This is going to be awesome... ^.^

Re: MCcomix Presents The Birthday Present Pt.1

PostPosted: April 8th, 2010, 6:51 pm
by Akonkid
Dear MCcomix Presents,
This story seems eerily familiar... Wait...How did you get a hold of my journal? Or did Trish tell you about my birthday present from last year? That little minx could never keep her mouth shut... Nevermind. Ignore that and carry on. I have a naughty girlfriend to spank.
Sincerely,
Akonkid

Re: MCcomix Presents The Birthday Present Pt.1

PostPosted: April 8th, 2010, 8:20 pm
by Doctor Robo
That's one of the most creative MC comics or stories I have ever seen - and I've seen a lot. Great job! I'm looking forward to part two!

- Doc

Re: MCcomix Presents The Birthday Present Pt.1

PostPosted: April 8th, 2010, 11:33 pm
by GrimTidings
She's feisty. She's smart. She's cute. She's in for it for sure considering where this story's happening.

Nice use of the frame with in the frame. Really looking forward to what happens next!

(edit: and, on my second re-read, is it sad that I'm really hoping she ends up cooking him something just because? Really nice work setting up her character - and her dominance in the relationship so the reversal is that much more... powerful.)