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That was great! I'm usually not one for that (to avoid any spoilage) particular storytelling device (I usually consider it a cheat) but that's the best and most appropriate use of it I've seen. And there is no arguing with the results. Even better, the story didn't go where I thought it was going. I love surprises. Thanks for another exciting chapter!

I agree with Grim. Generally, the plot device used, is for the lame or the lazy, and is so predictable. Not this time, no sir. (If you haven't read the episode yet...stop here. Writing about how good it is, will ruin it for you). In all seriousness, this twist caught me by surprise as much as 'Battle Angel Alita', volume 5, and there, the artist had the benefit of physical comic book pages to do this twist with. Super kudos! I can't wait to see where the story is headed.

I agree wholeheartedly with GrimTidings and 20eyes. I didn't see that ending coming at all, so the twist was a LOT of fun. Great job!

- Doc

Very nicely done! You turned the ending of the previous chapter which did not look very promising into a direction that I was pleasantly surprised by!

Thanks for all the kind words everybody!

Alot of the story ideas were directly from The Collector, so I'm sure he'll be thrilled at the good reception.

Thanks for your comments people, I'm glad you enjoyed the twist, and hope you enjoyed it as much as I enjoyed wrong-footing you!

And also, great work as always Akonkid!

The Collector

Loved the visuals. Vanishing Girl is very pretty and she looks very good, er, in those final few pages. Excellent twist too. No what I expected but certainly has me excited about what's to come!

Outstanding twist for this chapter!....I suspect there's another angle with the seeds planted yet to be seen here and I'm looking forward to seeing if I'm right!

Keep up the great work.

Hey everyone. Back with a new "Vanishing Act".

It was a long and difficult fight, but even the strong-willed Vanishing Girl could not resist Toymaster's enslavement device. Now a mindless slave, her fate is sealed to a lifetime of mindless service. But who will she end up serving? While the wicked socialite Anna Moroz seeks to claim the superheroine as her prize, Toymaster himself seems to to want her as his own personal plaything. Who will ultimately end up with full control of the hypnotized hottie? Or will the ensuing argument give the hapless heroine a narrow window to escape her sinister fate? Find out in "Vanishing Act" issue 9, only at MCComix!

http://www.mccomix.com/members/gallery2/main.php?g2_itemId=6438

Hope you all enjoy the new update!

Akonkid:
Very very nice !
I just love the direction the story has gone so far. I really enjoy seeing Ms. Moroz get her comeupance.
She should now be plugged up the rear as well with a blow up plug.
I do hope the good guys don't come to Vanishing Girl's and the others' rescue, at least just yet.

Keep up the great work.

bluemax

These last couple of installments have been great! Vanishing Girl and Anna Moroz make sexy dolls indeed! Nice outfits!

Great little chapter....it'll be interesting to see where things go from here and if more League members investigate and possibly get added to the Toymaster's collection.

Beautiful work as always! I can't tell you how awesome it is to see my semi-coherent, rambling scripts turned into such a wonderfully realized set of images. I can't wait to see how the next part comes out!

The Collector

Awesome new arc to the story.

You know what Toymaster needs...some toy soldiers...just dress those babes up in some fetish toy trooperettes and he has a little army...literally.

P

Akonkid:
How bout some more use and abuse of Anna Moroz? Maybe some latex, some plugs (preferably inflatable), corsets, etc...
Then use her and sugar and spice in some operation? Maybe with slaves Megan and Ms Walsh?

I was also thinking that what if Gypsy moth sends Cowgirl to look for Vanishing girl and instead gets caught by the Toymaster.
Will she be able to get away? Will she be converted to fuckdoll by the toymaster? Will Gypsy moth come to her rescue??

Naaah! How bout having Gypsy moth get caught and converted as well??

A small army of fuckdolls to play with....luck toymaster??

thanks and looking forwar to future episodes and also future series (sequels?) from one of the most talented 3D artists around.

regards,

bluemax