As I received some suggestion about I needed a editor for my comics, I asked for help with that and thanks to Macrolass' help I'm able to offer to you a edited and revised version of the published chapter of Blunder Woman's "Mindloss"
You've Multipaneled High Resolution version of the comic here: http://www.mccomix.com/members/gallery2/main.php?g2_itemId=68556
And there is also separate edited versions for each chapter here:
Issue #1: http://www.mccomix.com/members/gallery2/main.php?g2_itemId=66014
Issue #2: http://www.mccomix.com/members/gallery2/main.php?g2_itemId=66572
Issue #3: http://www.mccomix.com/members/gallery2/main.php?g2_itemId=66581
