nitpicker wrote:Excellent start. Nice to see another superheroine fall under the thrall of some wicked villainess. With Chrome Queen under some post hypnotic suggestion, poor Platinum Protector will never knew what hits her.
Hope the update comes soon.
nitpicker wrote:Mid September? Ack that's a long wait. Great first chapter. Always enjoy seeing a heroine about to commit dastardly deeds under post hypnotic suggestion. muhahahaha
nitpicker wrote:Really like how this story is going but when can we expect an update?
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