Suburban Secrets

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Suburban Secrets

Postby Northern Chill » April 30th, 2013, 6:46 am

Hello everybody.....today, the opening chapter of Suburban Secrets debuts in the member's section here at MCComix.

Mount Carlion is a typical upscale gated community with lavish homes and people carrying on lives befitting their status. The Johnstons are seemingly no different than anyone else....well, except when a beautiful heroine shows up at the door. How is Dynamic Damsel's arrival taken...and what does it mean for her hostess? Find out as the sensusal secrets of the participants start to unfold.

This marks my first time collaborating with the artist Mitru and it is a great honor to do so. He brings a phenomenal style to his art and I think it will work extremely well in the story as it plays out.

Members can find this update in the member's section at http://www.mccomix.com/members/gallery2 ... emId=73475

Feedback welcome as always....enjoy!!!

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Re: Suburban Secrets

Postby mns_95125 » April 30th, 2013, 8:46 pm

Interesting. I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes -- the hinted backstory offers a number of intriguing possibilities.
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Re: Suburban Secrets

Postby Northern Chill » May 2nd, 2013, 12:55 pm

mns_95125 wrote:Interesting. I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes -- the hinted backstory offers a number of intriguing possibilities.


I've left deliverately vague at the beginning so details fill in as the story moves along...hope it's a great read for everybody!!

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Re: Suburban Secrets

Postby Northern Chill » June 11th, 2013, 7:52 am

Hello everybody...today, chapter 2 of Suburban Secrets debuts here in the member's section at MCComix.

Luxandra Johnston has been busy at home with her new pleasure toy - the heroine known as Dynamic Damsel. To that end, the dark haired woman looks to put the mesmerized woman through her paces, culminating in satiating Luxandra's sexual appetite!!

Find out what happens in this smoking hot update and how these actions seem to tie into yet unseen players as the story unfolds.

Members can find this update at http://www.mccomix.com/members/gallery2 ... emId=76380

Enjoy the update...feedback welcome as always!!

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Re: Suburban Secrets

Postby nitpicker » June 17th, 2013, 6:20 am

Definitely one of my favorite stories on this site. Any chance that any other heroines have been "subverted"? Hope to see another update soon.

Excellent writing and great artwork.
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Re: Suburban Secrets

Postby mitru » June 17th, 2013, 3:51 pm

Thanks for the part I do.
I've to say that I feel honored to work with a such talented writer like NC.
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Re: Suburban Secrets

Postby Northern Chill » June 18th, 2013, 4:53 pm

nitpicker wrote:Definitely one of my favorite stories on this site. Any chance that any other heroines have been "subverted"? Hope to see another update soon.

Excellent writing and great artwork.


Glad you've liked what read so far, Nitpicker. Although I can't reveal too much about future story turns, I will say there'll be more lovely ladies falling into obedience in the coming chapters...all beautifully illustrated by Mitru (who has done a great job so far).

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Re: Suburban Secrets

Postby nitpicker » June 20th, 2013, 6:23 am

Definitely looking forward to the coming chapters then...

Any chance that the New Guard heroines will appear either in this story? Not a huge fan of dolls.
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Re: Suburban Secrets

Postby Northern Chill » June 20th, 2013, 10:37 am

nitpicker wrote:Definitely looking forward to the coming chapters then...

Any chance that the New Guard heroines will appear either in this story? Not a huge fan of dolls.


At present, the members of New Guard are not slated to appear in this story though after the setting and characters that reside in this city are established, I wouldn't rule out some of those heroines appearing down the line.

I understand your sentiment about dolls, Nitpicker. Once Artiste concludes, I think you'll be very pleased by what lays ahead for the sexy New Guard heroines.

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Re: Suburban Secrets

Postby Northern Chill » July 23rd, 2013, 7:57 am

Hello everyone...today, part three of Suburban Secrets debuts in the member's section here at MCComix.

Future Tech is one of the major employers for the relatively quiet suburban town of Mount Carlion. Inside the headquarters of the company, many people carry about their daily routines on a normal basis. For some, that means meetings relating to the plans Future Tech is embarking on. For others, it may mean a steamy encounter during a lunch break. Find out how these incidents may impact the participants...and what secrets lie behind closed door in this provocative installment of Suburban Secrets!!

Members can find this installment at http://www.mccomix.com/members/gallery3 ... /Chapter-3

Big kudos to Mitru for some great art in this update...he's doing a phenomenal job in this story!!

Enjoy the update..feedback welcome as always.

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Re: Suburban Secrets

Postby nitpicker » July 23rd, 2013, 6:57 pm

Completely confused by the storyline now. 2 Dynamic Damsels? Or do we have an army of women who can all assume the powers of Dynamic Damsel?

Not sure where this storyline is going but the artwork was great as usual.
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Re: Suburban Secrets

Postby Northern Chill » July 23rd, 2013, 7:58 pm

nitpicker wrote:Completely confused by the storyline now. 2 Dynamic Damsels? Or do we have an army of women who can all assume the powers of Dynamic Damsel?

Not sure where this storyline is going but the artwork was great as usual.


Hi nitpicker...I figured there might be a bit of confusion going on but things will somewhat clear up as info is revealed about everyone involved...including a few yet to be seen.

It'll be a fun read...hang in there.

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Re: Suburban Secrets

Postby Northern Chill » July 24th, 2013, 11:21 am

Just a note..caught a mistake on page 52 of this most recent update after posting (top panel had a minor but important change that needed to be done). I've reuploaded the correct version in the member's section.

My apologies to everyone...

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Re: Suburban Secrets

Postby Northern Chill » August 6th, 2013, 7:53 am

Greetings everyone...today part 4 of Suburban Secrets debuts in the member's section at MCComix.

Dynamic Damsel is a well known icon to the people of Mount Carlion but to a few powerful individuals, she is seen as a pawn in a plan for power. To that end, the heroine has been silenced by them but could these nefarious plans be spoiled by a mysterious visitor looking to free her? Will her actions interfere with Future Tech's plans to introduce DD's successor? Find out in today's exciting update of Suburban Secrets!

Members can find this update at http://www.mccomix.com/members/gallery3 ... /Chapter-4

Big kudos to Mitru for the great looking art in this chapter...kudos!!!

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Re: Suburban Secrets

Postby nitpicker » September 12th, 2013, 9:28 pm

When will this be updated again? One of my favorite stories but awfully confusing atm.
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