Flawed Actions

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Re: Flawed Actions

Postby obviousagent » July 29th, 2014, 7:46 am

What a great episode, cliff hanger ending which can go a lot of ways......
As always the writing and artwork are top notch.
Personally I would like to see Eotla disappear into Cyber Seeker anonymity to confuse Mindtra and allow the dominator time to take care of Mindtra then they both become consortbots.........
But that's just me :D
Can't wait for the next instalment of this great comic.
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Re: Flawed Actions

Postby Lt_Phoenix » August 4th, 2014, 4:42 am

Great update. Already looking forward to the next chapter :-)
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Re: Flawed Actions

Postby Northern Chill » August 26th, 2014, 8:51 am

Hello everybody...today, part 10 of Flawed Actions debuts in the member's section here at MCcomix.

Eotla has been captured by the minions of the Dominator and is now a "guest" in the villain's base. The Dominator looks to add Eotla to his growing army of mindless servants but is the heroine's resistance to the machiniations too much...see what happens in today's exciting update of Flawed Actions.

Members can find this update at http://www.mccomix.com/members/gallery3 ... Chapter-10

Big kudos to MadCurse for the great looking art in this update.

Enjoy the update...feedback welcome as always!!

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Re: Flawed Actions

Postby Northern Chill » September 25th, 2014, 10:19 am

Hi everyone...just to let you know, there'll be an update to this story next week but due to r/l problems that have happened, it won't be available till Thursday or Friday. My apologies to all the members here.

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Re: Flawed Actions

Postby obviousagent » September 25th, 2014, 3:26 pm

Lo hope all is well.
here's hoping that this conditioning works and then holds.
The cyber seekers need to add more letters and an E would be perfect for eotla.
none of this series has disappointed and it's one of my favourites on here.
keep it going.
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Re: Flawed Actions

Postby Northern Chill » October 3rd, 2014, 12:12 pm

Just to keep everybody in the know, MadCurse is struggling mightily with some glitches in his Poser rendering program. As a result, the update will probably be posted here Saturday or Sunday, at the latest.

My apologies to everyone here..I hope the update is worth the wait.
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Re: Flawed Actions

Postby Northern Chill » October 5th, 2014, 4:08 pm

Hi everybody...today, part 11 debuts in the member's section here at MCComix...

Before I delve into the update, my apologies for the update being this late. Real life can throw massive curveballs at times and i know this has been a stressful week for MadCurse and myself. Anyhoo, without further delay, onto the update...

Eotla is the "guest" of the cybernetic villain Dominator, who seeks to add her to his growing army of enslaved women and use them to rule all that he desires. His first attempt to transform Eotla failed so the Dominator turns to the next option - the ruthless Cyber Seekers. Will they succeed where the Consort Bots failed? See what happens in today's exciting chapter of Flawed Actions!!

Members can find this update at http://www.mccomix.com/members/gallery3 ... Chapter-11

Big kudos to MadCurse who managed to do fantastic art on this update!!

Enjoy the update...feedback welcome as always.

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Re: Flawed Actions

Postby obviousagent » October 6th, 2014, 4:28 am

Well I had hoped the seekers would add to their ranks, sadly they didn't.
Still another great update by you both.
and there's still time for more cyber seeker conversions, I hope.
keep the good stuff coming, along with Uzo you and madcurse rock this place.
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Re: Flawed Actions

Postby Northern Chill » October 7th, 2014, 10:21 am

obviousagent wrote:Well I had hoped the seekers would add to their ranks, sadly they didn't.
Still another great update by you both.
and there's still time for more cyber seeker conversions, I hope.
keep the good stuff coming, along with Uzo you and madcurse rock this place.


Thanks, Obviousagent. I think you'll like what lies ahead for all the players in Flawed Actions. In addition, Madcurse and I have been kicking around a few ideas that will spin off the end of this arc.

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Re: Flawed Actions

Postby obviousagent » October 8th, 2014, 6:56 pm

Now that sounds good, can't wait till the next installment.
The efforts of you, madcurse and all the other artists are much appreciated.
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Re: Flawed Actions

Postby obviousagent » November 3rd, 2014, 9:42 am

Good looking cover for issue 12.
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Re: Flawed Actions

Postby Northern Chill » November 6th, 2014, 10:45 pm

Hello everybody....sorry for being late. Real life can wreak havoc on plans but things are done so without further adieu, chapter twelve of Flawed Actions debuts in the member's section here at MCComix.

Eotla finds herself at the tender mercies of the diabolical Dominator and has managed to foil the cyborg's previous attempts to enslave her. Now, though, the Dominator looks to get personally involved and achieve his victory, no matter what the cost is. Can he win? Meanwhile, a long time civilian friend of Eotla has arrived in the area for her friend. Will her arrival throw a wrench in the Dominator's plans...or something else?

Members can find this exciting update at http://www.mccomix.com/members/gallery3 ... Chapter-12

Big kudos to MadCurse for the fantastic art in this update!!

Enjoy the update..feedback welcome as always.

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Re: Flawed Actions

Postby obviousagent » November 7th, 2014, 1:58 am

Well the Dominator has accomplished his domination of Eotla, nicely done.
Great art and story telling. Her new outfit looks good.
We now get to see what is in store for Yasmin :D
I am hoping for a new Cyber Seeker as I think their transformation and what they become is much hotter than the consort bots, but that's just me. lol.
Keep up the fantastic work both of you.
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Re: Flawed Actions

Postby Northern Chill » November 11th, 2014, 10:43 am

obviousagent wrote:Well the Dominator has accomplished his domination of Eotla, nicely done.
Great art and story telling. Her new outfit looks good.
We now get to see what is in store for Yasmin :D
I am hoping for a new Cyber Seeker as I think their transformation and what they become is much hotter than the consort bots, but that's just me. lol.
Keep up the fantastic work both of you.


Thanks Obviousagent. I hope you enjoy what lies ahead for the rest of this story.

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Re: Flawed Actions

Postby obviousagent » December 30th, 2014, 8:30 am

Well just seen the cover for ep 13 and can't wait to see what is going to happen next.
This story is awesome and the art work second to none.
Just makes me wonder what you have in store for Mindtra?
really looking forward to the follow on ideas you spoke about.

Hope you had a great chrimbo.
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