Night Moves

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Re: Night Moves

Postby Northern Chill » October 23rd, 2012, 7:49 pm

Thanks for the feedback, everyone. It's been great working on this arc and Uzobono's input on Trick's dialog for this update certainly gave it an extra edge and more.

The cover for the next chapter should be up in a few days...

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Re: Night Moves

Postby Sumatra » October 24th, 2012, 2:50 pm

Fucking. Great. Issue. Nuff said lol.

Minor gripe being Justice Woman and Gallant Girl's mystery not solved.

Sounding like an echo chamber, extremely hot issue for sure. Fact that you have a villain who made another villain her slave, then makes a heroine her slave and makes the heroine "punish" the villain?
Ridiculous. Hot. Your artwork is amazing. Little touches like Plastique's skin turning, how ripped she is. Gas effect was cool, assuming that's what did her powers in, weakened her? Was ambiguous, liked that.

Miss Tricks is brutally fantastic, just a well-crafted villain. Does feel she's a contender for heroines versus others. Plastique as Prime is the hottest fiction I've read in some time, kudos on that.

The implants are genious. Thought, personality change with sex? Doesn't get better that that. There a date for the next issue?

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Re: Night Moves

Postby bluemax2 » October 25th, 2012, 9:28 am

Night and Uzo:
Fantastic chapter!!
I can't wait to see what MissTreats does to the other nosey heroines and infact anybody.

By the way what happened to the other evil doctors, Nemesis and the Greybots?
Are we going to have a war of zombies, ultimately?

Can't wait to see more.
Please don't let it take so long till the next episode.
Everyone out just can't wait to see what comes next.

Keep up the great work.

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Re: Night Moves

Postby xarielx » October 27th, 2012, 11:41 am

Having come off reading this sublime chapter, I can't thank you enough, it certainly pushes quite a few buttons! While the over-arching plot is well crafted, the mystery of Justice Woman and Gallant Girl still looms over the trio very heavily, we can see that much from Plastique's behavior, the sudden twist of turning our chief protagonist and investigator of said mystery over to 'the dark side' is just about as good as erofic gets. Miss Tricks usings the body and mind's own sexual release to rewrite the brain is a tech fetishists dream, and hearkens to a few select films we may all remember. What is important to mention however is your complete switch of the dynamic of a story such as this, while the cover certainly hinted at this outcome, seeing Plastique turn into a fetish/S&M zealot is a tremendous turn on. Your artwork is also something to be commended Northern Chill, as Uzobono seems no longer to be the artist I believe you have done a superb job in filling the gap, very well crafted with lots of dynamic scenes.
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Re: Night Moves

Postby Hector2 » October 27th, 2012, 6:47 pm

Dear McTek:

Night Moves # 4 was everything we want from an erotic comic and more. It has a good developed story, a coherent path of events, and mor e than forty pages. Fantastic.
The part I loved more was seeing Plastique slowly but surely defeated by the tramps the goddess put in his lair. Then, the sexy way she was overpowered by the machine and the brainwaishing disk.

I must say that was my favorite part: I love to see heroines moaning and panting trying to avoid their doom. It's great when an heroine has the resolve to fight these terrible devices.

And even if this would be not good enough, we have Plastique’s conversion to the goddess champion who now will fight her former friends. This is classic superherioc stuff and its one of the motives I love your work.

This is really great work, congratulations.

PD What happened to Uzobono?
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Re: Night Moves

Postby madcap » October 28th, 2012, 7:45 am

Hey Northern Chill, I'm missing a few pages from some of the earlier chapters and when I went back to look for them, they're not there! Can you look into that and make sure they get reposted? Thanks!!
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Re: Night Moves

Postby Northern Chill » October 28th, 2012, 1:56 pm

The artist that began this arc remains the same as before...the cover credits are a reflection of artist preference and I respect that choice. Uzo has been a tremendous asset to this arc and if you enjoy what has transpired so far, I daresay the chapters to come will be phenomenal as well.

Thanks for the feedback,

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Re: Night Moves

Postby xarielx » November 17th, 2012, 8:53 am

Good to know! I love Uzobono's work, and would be remiss if I did not say Night Moves not be the same without his amazing scenes! With that said, absolutely cannot wait for Tuesday, the next cover certainly is very enticing as to the possibilities in store for the heroes and Prime!
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Re: Night Moves

Postby Northern Chill » November 17th, 2012, 12:55 pm

I hate to be the bearer of bad news but it looks like the update scheduled for the 20th will be late due to r/l issues...if everything goes according to plan, the update should be posted no later than the 26th.

Sorry to ruin everyone's plans but I can honestly say that if you've enjoyed this story so far, the brief delay will be worth it.
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Re: Night Moves

Postby tomcat » November 17th, 2012, 2:22 pm

You don't have to tell us it'll be awesome. We all know that :D

Sigh... oh, well, we can wait for quality. Hey-ho :)
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Re: Night Moves

Postby Sumatra » November 20th, 2012, 3:30 pm

Another delay? Disappointing, one week is fine to wait.

Hope this won't suffer from server issues, can't wait for it.

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Re: Night Moves

Postby Northern Chill » November 20th, 2012, 3:36 pm

Thanks for the understanding and patience, people...as I've said, I loathe not being on time with updates but things do happen unexpectedly. I hope when the update arrives, it lives up to your expectations (looks to be another big one).

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Re: Night Moves

Postby Northern Chill » November 26th, 2012, 9:14 am

Hello everybody...before we get to the update intro and such, an explanation has to be made. Talking with Uzo over the weekend, we came to the realization that the update would not be fully done by today. Given Uzo's hefty backlog of pages to render/postwork for the multiple arcs underway and the fact this update has already been delayed by close to a week, I've decided to post the first half today and when the second half is ready to go, I'll upload it in the members section here with some notice if possible. As stated before, it's a hefty update so there'll be good reading in both parts.

Whew...:)

In today's update, Justice Woman and Gallant Girl have decided to venture into a building to see what their friend Plastique has found in her own search. Little do they know that the structure is the base for the techno cult leader Miss Tricks, who is looking forward to greet her unwanted visitors in her own way...

Find out what happens in this action packed update in the member's section here at http://www.mccomix.com/members/gallery2 ... emId=59157

Big kudos to Uzobono for the tremendous art in this update and sage advise on dialog...!!!

Enjoy...feedback welcome as always.

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Re: Night Moves

Postby Hector2 » November 26th, 2012, 10:13 am

Dear Northernchill and Uzobono:

I just want to thank you for this update, and also to suggest you that, given that your updates have a lot more pages that any other comic in this site, maybe you could consider to update half the content in twice the date of the updates?
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Re: Night Moves

Postby Hector2 » November 26th, 2012, 10:14 am

Dear Northernchill and Uzobono:

I just want to thank you for this update, and also to suggest you that, given that your updates have a lot more pages that any other comic in this site, maybe you could consider to update half the content in twice the date of the updates?
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