Night Moves

[Northern Chill]

That was a brilliant chapter. I didn't expect any of that to happen just based on the cover. Nor did I expect what happened in the end. Now I can only wonder what your next chapter can be about.

Glad you enjoyed the update, Champ. As scary as it may seem, it could have been longer in certain spots though I think Uzobono might not be looking at me too kindly with that notion.

As for the next chapter, the only thing I'll say is that it picks up on elements seen in past chapters...and it will be truly epic...no bragging there, I'm very happy with what I have planned and I know you will be, too.

Northern Chill

[Champ]

Wooo! I look forward to the next cover to appear in the Free Section when the time comes!

[Sumatra]

Definitely spot on with epic. This issue was exactly that. Worth the wait and more.

Escape scene was a little rushed. Loved to have seen how Justice and Gallant got out of there. Rescuing Plastique, the slaves, was well done, Trick's last scene was great. Very imposing. How the slaves drooled after devices taken off. Liked the nod to 'Shopping'.

Love how Prime lives on, she's got a split personality now, guessing that will cause her friends problems. Her friend was sexy as hell, loved the glasses, whole scene with Anna, Plastique, her conversion was fucking hot. How she realized she would have been in her friends place if Anna kept on it. Thinking being Prime saved her ass .

What a cliffhanger with Suzanna waking up, can't wait for the next issue Northern.

-Sumatra

[sohta123]

Super hot episode!
I was worried that the effects would go away but the scene where she loses her temper and Prime resurfaces is so smoking! Love how she is corrupted now and has her softer beauty back.
Hoping that Prime becomes more in charge and gathers more drones or corrupts more gals.
Would like to see her clothed in more dom vs sub outfits as she progresses.

Can't wait for the next cover.

[Northern Chill]

Definitely spot on with epic. This issue was exactly that. Worth the wait and more.

Escape scene was a little rushed. Loved to have seen how Justice and Gallant got out of there. Rescuing Plastique, the slaves, was well done, Trick's last scene was great. Very imposing. How the slaves drooled after devices taken off. Liked the nod to 'Shopping'.

Love how Prime lives on, she's got a split personality now, guessing that will cause her friends problems. Her friend was sexy as hell, loved the glasses, whole scene with Anna, Plastique, her conversion was fucking hot. How she realized she would have been in her friends place if Anna kept on it. Thinking being Prime saved her ass .

What a cliffhanger with Suzanna waking up, can't wait for the next issue Northern.

-Sumatra

I'm happy you enjoyed this chapter, Sumatra. My thinking with Plastique is for the mind control she went under with Tricks, a complete return to normalcy for her right away is a bit much to accept...especially with other factors in play.

Many elements are in play and some will start to get resolved in the coming chapter.

Northern Chill

[Northern Chill]

Super hot episode!
I was worried that the effects would go away but the scene where she loses her temper and Prime resurfaces is so smoking! Love how she is corrupted now and has her softer beauty back.
Hoping that Prime becomes more in charge and gathers more drones or corrupts more gals.
Would like to see her clothed in more dom vs sub outfits as she progresses.

Can't wait for the next cover.

Prime is a favorite identity of mine as well, Sohta...as she is the antithesis of Plastique before Tricks. What happens with this state of mind remains to be seen, of course, as Plastique's world is getting more complicated with each passing chapter.

Northern Chill

[Hector2]

Dear Northern Chill and Uzobono:

This issue was great! I thought "That's insane, why the goddess would left if she clearly was winning? But when I saw the rest of the story, I understood that even whithout the goddess, the heroines had still a long path to go.

Supriya was an asshole victim or what? Suzanna reacted like the incredible Hulk (you definitely will not like her when she is angry). Jennifer Maxwell has a heart? After all? Great! that was really surprising!

This is my favorite storyline at Caro City... at least Ms. Justice is an heroine who can overcome a lot... this is the kind of storylines that I like, with some hope

Great work!

[xarielx]

You continue to amaze me, as I finished this issue, a multitude of questions popped up personally. Did Miss Tricks plan all of this? It seemed while she wasn't happy with the outcome, she knew this "could" happen, but did nothing to prevent the breakout of Justice Woman and Gallant Girl. I admit to being a little sad that their adventure came to a close so abruptly, with a sudden breakout and the incredibly well executed and shocking release of Plastique, Jennifer Maxwell and Tatiana. I love the eerily quiet yet not subtle set up for Miss Tricks' control, we know Prime is still alive and well, echoing the above, do NOT make Plastique mad! The dichotomy of a heroine just freed from enslavement, coming so close to rendering a friend, if ever a nosy one, into a mindless toy, speaks volumes for the thought put into the plot. The breastfeeding, and overall tone set after the escape that true to Uzobono's setting, that there are permanent changes to characters continues to amaze me as I read your work. Thank you for providing such a a highly erotically charged comic and I wait in anticipation for your next issue!

[xarielx]

Northern, something that begs to be mentioned is this issue's length. I simply cannot believe the quality and scope put into such a mammoth piece of work, kudos to both you and Uzo.

[Northern Chill]

Dear Northern Chill and Uzobono:

This issue was great! I thought "That's insane, why the goddess would left if she clearly was winning? But when I saw the rest of the story, I understood that even whithout the goddess, the heroines had still a long path to go.

Supriya was an asshole victim or what? Suzanna reacted like the incredible Hulk (you definitely will not like her when she is angry). Jennifer Maxwell has a heart? After all? Great! that was really surprising!

This is my favorite storyline at Caro City... at least Ms. Justice is an heroine who can overcome a lot... this is the kind of storylines that I like, with some hope

Great work!

Thanks Hector...I think you'll see that the heroines' journey is going to get even bumpier in the chapters to come. As for Jennifer, she's a character that I feel is more than a typical "mc the new woman unfortunate enough to cross her path" and her fall from grace in this section might teach her an invaluable lesson...or not....

[Northern Chill]

You continue to amaze me, as I finished this issue, a multitude of questions popped up personally. Did Miss Tricks plan all of this? It seemed while she wasn't happy with the outcome, she knew this "could" happen, but did nothing to prevent the breakout of Justice Woman and Gallant Girl. I admit to being a little sad that their adventure came to a close so abruptly, with a sudden breakout and the incredibly well executed and shocking release of Plastique, Jennifer Maxwell and Tatiana. I love the eerily quiet yet not subtle set up for Miss Tricks' control, we know Prime is still alive and well, echoing the above, do NOT make Plastique mad! The dichotomy of a heroine just freed from enslavement, coming so close to rendering a friend, if ever a nosy one, into a mindless toy, speaks volumes for the thought put into the plot. The breastfeeding, and overall tone set after the escape that true to Uzobono's setting, that there are permanent changes to characters continues to amaze me as I read your work. Thank you for providing such a a highly erotically charged comic and I wait in anticipation for your next issue!

Hi Xarielx,

It's not a stretch to surmise that Tricks anticipated tides turning against her in an abrupt manner...from my perspective, a good villain plans for outcomes other than complete and utter defeat of the forces of right and justice.

I've mentioned elsewhere that I'm quite fond of the Prime persona and how Plastique reacts when she realizes the damage caused by unleashing this new side of her persona plays a large role in the events to come.

[Northern Chill]

Northern, something that begs to be mentioned is this issue's length. I simply cannot believe the quality and scope put into such a mammoth piece of work, kudos to both you and Uzo.

The credit goes mostly to Uzo...it is an honor to be working with an artist that is relatively new to Poser work yet can put out work that is great to script and dialog for.

The next chapter's script is done and with Uzo...we went over a few details this weekend (back and forth type stuff typical of creative brainstorming) and prelimed the facts after the fallout of it. Whether it lives up to the hype I've already set in motion for chapter 8 is up to the members here...myself and Uzo will give it our best efforts, I can assure you.

Northern Chill

[bluemax2]

Northern and Uzo:
Any news on the next installment?
This story is great and continues to thrill and excite with every chapter.

I do wish you could do something exciting and naughty with Justice Woman. She really needs to mind controlled and used.

Thanks all. Keep up the great work.

regards,

Bluemax

[Northern Chill]

Hi Bluemax,

Work continues on the comics for Uzo though I understand it's a very busy r/l thing for the artist at present. Nevertheless, I'm looking at mid May for the next installment with all the bells and whistles readers of the Night Moves arc have come to enjoy and love.

Glad you've enjoyed what has been so far,

Northern Chill

[Northern Chill]

Cover for part 8 is now up in the covers section....as mentioned, targeting mid May for this exciting update.

Northern Chill