Night Moves

[Champ]

This was totally worth the wait. 60 pages made it feel like a triple update. I loved the treatments and discipline involved. I await Part 7 and the plan unfold.

[bluemax2]

Northern and Uzo:
Fantastic chapter!!

I especially loved the dream sequence for Prime while she was being milked. Will we see Justine and Cora really become slaves to the Mistress?
I really do hope so.
As I requested in the past, no cavalry to the rescue, please.
Seeing Justine and Cora "droned" and made buff and large titted like Prime would be serious icing on this cake.

What about other drones? How bout the police chief and some other poor passerby's?

Will be be seeing Grey Drones get involved?
And what about the Collector? Is he going to clash with the Mistress?

Can't wait to see the next episode.

Keep up the great work gentlemen.

regards,

Bluemax

[Sumatra]

Agreed. Great fucking job. What an update.

This one didn't advance the plot as much as I thought. Prime gets better each issue, really loving how twisted Plastique has become. Scene with her doll at home drove that point home. Seems like forever she was a superhero.

That dream. Smoking hot. Hope it comes to reality. Definitely loving the love scenes in this. Prime has stamina . The milkings just get hotter each time, loving that.

Miss Tricks developed well as a villain. Would love to see her and Dylan go at it. Where is that guy? He was looking for Jennifer?

Special props to Prime taunting Justice and Gallant. Hero corruption at it's best.

-Sumatra

[Northern Chill]

Thanks for the feedback everybody...as Sumatra suggested, this chapter was deliberately a bit slower in moving the plot along as we establish character types. I will say that as the arc gets to its climaxes, the twists will come that much harder and quicker for all types...hopefully it keeps everyone entertained as plans reach fruition or not...

[xarielx]

A very strong update Northern! I simply love how you're presenting Prime as the antithesis of what Plastique was. She was, to me, a young fairly inexperienced heroine who, if I read Uzobono's "Biographies" correctly, was tutored by Justice Woman, shortly before Night Moves #1. Then, to supplant her student or neophyte role to a dominant fetishist slave is, well superbly crafted. Whereas Plastique was unsure, nervous, and couple that with a brashness looking for her friends, Prime oozes confidence, and a somewhat sado-masochistic streak, especially regarding sex. Her milking I find to be highly erotic, where she's at once Miss Trick's 'champion', who herself is developing a deep goddess-complex, and also proud to be serving in such a debasing role as a food factory. A very well deserved thumbs up!

[Northern Chill]

A very strong update Northern! I simply love how you're presenting Prime as the antithesis of what Plastique was. She was, to me, a young fairly inexperienced heroine who, if I read Uzobono's "Biographies" correctly, was tutored by Justice Woman, shortly before Night Moves #1. Then, to supplant her student or neophyte role to a dominant fetishist slave is, well superbly crafted. Whereas Plastique was unsure, nervous, and couple that with a brashness looking for her friends, Prime oozes confidence, and a somewhat sado-masochistic streak, especially regarding sex. Her milking I find to be highly erotic, where she's at once Miss Trick's 'champion', who herself is developing a deep goddess-complex, and also proud to be serving in such a debasing role as a food factory. A very well deserved thumbs up!

Glad you enjoyed the update, Xarielx...its been a great writing experience and I know what is to come will be just as entertaining.

Northern Chill

[Champ]

Will the next chapter update be a later release like this past one? Or a bit sooner? Not asking negatively, just curious.

[Northern Chill]

I wish I could give you a definite date as to when the next update will be, Champ. For chapters that are this big in size and such, it takes a bit of time obviously for everything from script to art to dialoging. Right now, I'm guessing the next chapter will probably be larger than this most recent one....when I have more certainty as to possible date of publishing and a cover ready to be seen, I'll post about it here.

Thanks for your enthusiasm, Champ...its's readers like you and the others that make this work a great thing to do.

Northern Chill

[Champ]

Larger! Oh wow, now that's extreme! No matter, that is the best part that makes the wait so fun!

Fan For Life!

[Northern Chill]

Cover for next part is up....read what you may into it......date will be added when available.

[Northern Chill]

Ok...progress on next update...prelim art and dialog is completed and hoping next week will see the debut of the newest chapter. What day is still hard to determine...as I noted before, it's big in size so patience is required. It's going to have a little bit of everything and I think readers will be enjoying what unfolds.

Northern Chill

[Champ]

The cover has questions about it, but I know it'll get answered. Looking forward to it.

[Champ]

Such a beautiful morning on the far side of the world. C'mon EST time! Night Moves can't wait! XD. *excited*

[Northern Chill]

Hello everybody...today part 7 of Night Moves debuts in the members section here at MCComix.

Miss Tricks has everything under control and looks to resolve a few loose ends. To that end, the disposition of Justice Woman and Gallant Girl is next on her agenda...though the two may have something to say about this decision. See what unfolds as the conflict is resolved, new characters enter the scene and decisions are reached with major ramifications, both immediate and future.

Members can find this mammoth update in the member's section at http://www.mccomix.com/members/gallery2 ... emId=70668

A big, big round of applause to Uzobono for the phenomenal art in this update and helping to tweak the dialog of this chapter.

Enjoy the update...feedback welcome as always!!!

Northern Chill

[Champ]

That was a brilliant chapter. I didn't expect any of that to happen just based on the cover. Nor did I expect what happened in the end. Now I can only wonder what your next chapter can be about.