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Hello all , I thought I'd start an update thread on my series "The Division" in the free area.

Thanks for looking and chapter 2 coming soon!

http://www.mccomix.com/gallery2/main.ph ... emId=44089

Really great job on the first issue!
Liked the premise very well.
This could go either way from the looks of it.

Can't wait to see what you've got instore next.
Any way to get a preview cover similar to others on here?

Sure, cover's up!

http://www.mccomix.com/gallery2/main.ph ... emId=44296

Next issue is almost done .

Great! Glad to hear it! I like it so far, especially the realpolitik twist youve taken with the "bad girl" who may not be so bad after all!

Chapter 2 is up in the free area!

http://www.mccomix.com/gallery2/main.ph ... emId=44295

I hope you like what I have so far, I'd love feedback as well! Chapter 3 coming soon!

Looking great Uzobono

Wow! Awesome!
I really like how 'The Lady' is succumbing to the power she can have over someone.
Can't wait for the next episode.

This is fantastic! Can't believe I didn't see it until just now. Really loved the conversion process you did. And the amount of world building you've done in just two issues is to be commended. Absolutely loving this so far. So thanks for all your hard work on this. I can't wait to see where the story goes next!

Hi Uzobono!

Your story is really revolutionary: While all the stories on this site are about some héroes standing up against villains and their various fights, Karo city is very different: It’s a story of a city overruned by the villains where a single hero is standing against them.

Another subversion is the Mind Control thing: In all of the others stories, Mind Control is a weapon the villain uses to control heroines. Anyone who gets controlled is a victim. Here has the same scenary, but now the heroine will use it against the villains: The villains use their free will to be villains, and the mind control will steal that from them.

This comics not only subverts the use of mindcontrol, but is placed in one of the more dystopian cities I have ever seen: villains tolerated by the government? All the citizens afraid of agents? It’s disturbing if you think about it.

I will review issue 2 next time.

Hector.

Thank you all for the feedback . Will comment later!

Here's a preview cover of the next issue still in progress.

http://www.mccomix.com/gallery2/main.ph ... emId=44553

That's a fantastic four on her chest!

she is very need in sex mode
now we see in kill mode.

Dear Uzobono:

Issue #2 left me a sensation of despair: Not for your work, of course, but for the world you have built: Caro city.
Haven chewing out Ruby seems to show the utter depravity and cynicism those agents have: In this city, things like compassion or pity are serious liabilities, and being cruel and cynical is the smart choice. And then they want to be even more cruel to other people (that is not them). This is the kind of mindset that only can survive in the totalitarism and fascist societies, and make the kind of life that everyone is begging to end.

Really, the Lady seems to have pity for Haven, but sadly it seems misplaced: Haven’s memories and personality are better of cleaned and put away, and I will throw the key away: Being a slave is an improvement. Also Ruby dependence of a total jerk like her is dangerous. Really, this city is like Potterville, a place where the people want to get drunk, and get drunk fast.

I really cannot wait to see the Lady liberating this town.

As you can see, this is in no way a critic to your work. I praise it because you have created in only two issues a credible world so bleak and full of despair.

Oh, and the mind control is not something evil, but maybe the only hope? Genius!

Keep up the good work.

Hello all! Chapter 3 of "The Division" is up in the free area!

http://www.mccomix.com/gallery2/main.ph ... emId=44552

Having received Haven's distress call, Agent Ruby rushes to save her one-time friend and mentor. Unaware of The Lady or the control she has over Haven, is Ruby prepared for a showdown with the Agency's best operative? What plans does The Lady have in store?

Hope you enjoy!

Just a little update to those who've enjoyed this series. Due to an accident couple with a power outage, I've lost both of my hard drives and most of my information, Poser, models, etc. It'll be a while before I post an update.