Uzobono's The Division

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Re: Uzobono's The Division

Postby Uzobono » January 9th, 2015, 3:13 pm

Hi everyone! I'm *super* excited to present the third issue of 'Aria of the Hive'!

This issue is heavy on the dialogue, so I hope you'll all enjoy it :p. It's also an issue I sneak in somethin' new so hope you enjoy that as well :).

You can find 'Aria of the Hive' #3 at:

http://www.mccomix.com/gallery3/index.p ... the-Hive-3

*or* download the .zip as well on my deviantart:

http://uzobono.deviantart.com/art/The-D ... -505946386

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Re: Uzobono's The Division

Postby Sumatra » January 18th, 2015, 4:13 pm

Amazing fucking issue. Ruby, the attack, Marion, Brody the sleeper drone, Timea fucking raging, loved it.

Any word on the next issue or is Core next?

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Re: Uzobono's The Division

Postby xarielx » January 31st, 2015, 4:10 pm

I only had one read of the main portion of this issue so far, and it contrasts with the repeated readings of many other comics, and of these comics in particular. Yet this issue in my opinion did a disservice to your story as a whole Uzo. The implementation of the decision to capture Xander felt right, yet the way it was done was distasteful to me, because it felt out of character, especially to Haven. I believe a more stealthy approach with some erotic mc mixed in would have worked better. Not to say the rest of the issue were things that I did not enjoy, especially after the capture, which were extremely engrossing. The betrayal by Nemesis and Rei of Queensbury was an absolute wonder to read, but again, had the initial opening catered to my interests I would hold this issue as another triumph Uzo. The only request I would ask of you is to leave the male-domination angle out completely, because I believe your comics are stronger for it. Thank you!
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Re: Uzobono's The Division

Postby Uzobono » April 11th, 2015, 4:24 pm

Hi everyone :).

I'm *so* excited to present the fourth issue of 'Aria of the Hive'!

I really hope you all enjoy this one to bits, and I'd *love* your feedback on it!

You can find 'Aria of the Hive' #4 at:

http://www.mccomix.com/gallery3/index.p ... the-Hive-4

*or* download the .zip at my deviantart:

http://uzobono.deviantart.com/art/The-D ... -526033382

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Re: Uzobono's The Division

Postby Tecknophyle » April 12th, 2015, 10:14 am

Outstanding as always.
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Re: Uzobono's The Division

Postby Telsis » April 20th, 2015, 1:45 pm

A tour de force.
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Re: Uzobono's The Division

Postby Uzobono » August 26th, 2015, 12:36 pm

Edit: Apologies for the late update >.<.

The fifth issue of 'Aria of the Hive' is here :).

This issue was particularly difficult to write-let alone complete-due to a horrible case of writer's block, and I have to thank my editor, Tabico, for the *huge* help she has provided. There is quite a bit of dialogue as always, and I hope it's readable (don't be afraid to zoom!).

Otherwise, I *really* hope you all enjoy this issue which turned out to be a giant hurdle for me creatively, and I would *love* to hear your feedback/thoughts :).

As always, the comic is *completely* free, and you can find it at my deviantart:

http://uzobono.deviantart.com/art/The-D ... -553699751

*Or* in the free section of mccomix :).

http://www.mccomix.com/gallery3/index.p ... the-Hive-5

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Re: Uzobono's The Division

Postby Uzobono » January 11th, 2016, 3:06 pm

The sixth issue of 'Aria of the Hive' is here :).

A *huge* 86 page epic at your fingertips :D. I *really* hope you all enjoy this issue which turned out much longer than I thought it would, and I would *love* to hear your feedback/thoughts :).

As always, the comic is *completely* free, and you can find it in the free area:

http://www.mccomix.com/gallery3/index.p ... the-Hive-6

*or* at my deviantart:

http://uzobono.deviantart.com/art/The-D ... -583177709

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