Brickhouse's Adventures in Malanga City!

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Brickhouse's Adventures in Malanga City!

Postby Mr. Cryptic » October 24th, 2013, 1:42 am

The prelude to Brickhouse's Adventures in Malanga City concludes with the sorceress Rhiannon using her erotic charms against Doctor Pretorius!
Can the master of mind control turn the tables on her, or will he fall under her spell and become her love slave!?
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Re: Brickhouse's Adventures in Malanga City!

Postby Mr. Cryptic » October 24th, 2013, 1:46 am

Just a point of clarification: I thought the Triskelion Spotlight was going to be just a short little story to explain what Dr. Pretorius was doing while his wife, Brickhouse, was a Prospero's slave. Then I got an inspiration for a fun story with Brickhouse going back to Malanga City, so this story is acting as a prologue to a longer story in the Victory City series. That series starring Brickhouse will start in two weeks in Victory City #49, and I'm looking forward to sharing it!
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Re: Brickhouse's Adventures in Malanga City!

Postby Mr. Cryptic » November 8th, 2013, 12:02 am

Fresh from being rescued from sexual domination by the archvillain Lord Prospero, Brickhouse, AKA Candice Carlson, returns home to find her husband missing!
Tracking him down means she needs to return to the Malanga Island, the City of Supervillains, where she had so recently been held in bondage!
To conceal her secret identity, Candice goes to Malanga Island alone!
Even with her incredible durability and strength, can she resist falling prey to the clever villains that infest the city!?
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Re: Brickhouse's Adventures in Malanga City!

Postby jrhcl2 » November 8th, 2013, 12:15 pm

Hello Mr. Cryptic!! Interesting start. But I do have a questions, does this story start before the first Victory legion story # 1-13 ?? Where the Dr. enslaved Ishtar and made her help him with his marriage??

I also have some questions about Prospero now that he has been defeated. While Ishtar was under Prospero spell she shared her knowledge of magic with him and later provided him with the method of getting the prana he needed to power his spells. First since Ishtar can reach across time and space and travel to different dimensions, why wouldnt Prospero be able to do that? Second why doesn't Prospero know where the gate is? Didn't Ishtar Share all her knowledge with him, while she was under his spell? Since he has Ishtar magical knowledge and he is more skills at using magic than Ishtar, he did defeat Ishtar ever time they faced off, wouldn't he know where the gate is? She did said everything I have is yours, when Ishtar was his slave!! I've been meaning to ask those questions, but I keep forgetting.
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Re: Brickhouse's Adventures in Malanga City!

Postby Mr. Cryptic » November 12th, 2013, 12:01 am

jrhcl2 wrote:Hello Mr. Cryptic!! Interesting start. But I do have a questions, does this story start before the first Victory legion story # 1-13 ?? Where the Dr. enslaved Ishtar and made her help him with his marriage??


Yes, this takes place before the Victory Legion series.

jrhcl2 wrote:I also have some questions about Prospero now that he has been defeated. While Ishtar was under Prospero spell she shared her knowledge of magic with him and later provided him with the method of getting the prana he needed to power his spells. First since Ishtar can reach across time and space and travel to different dimensions, why wouldnt Prospero be able to do that? Second why doesn't Prospero know where the gate is? Didn't Ishtar Share all her knowledge with him, while she was under his spell? Since he has Ishtar magical knowledge and he is more skills at using magic than Ishtar, he did defeat Ishtar ever time they faced off, wouldn't he know where the gate is? She did said everything I have is yours, when Ishtar was his slave!! I've been meaning to ask those questions, but I keep forgetting.


Prospero didn't learn every last thing that Ishtar knows, just some of her magical knowledge. He focused mainly on spells relating to domination and erotic technique. Prospero didn't defeat Ishtar everytime. At the end of the Prospero saga, she defeated him (Panthera Khan getting Prospero while he was having sex with Ishtar was Ishtar's plan).
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Re: Brickhouse's Adventures in Malanga City!

Postby Mr. Cryptic » November 21st, 2013, 12:27 am

Candice Carlson (secretly the heroine known as Brickhouse) ventured into Malanga City, the "City of Supervillains," to find her missing husband!
This turned out to be a foolhardy action, as she was quickly targeted by the crimelord known as the Gangster of Love!
Can she resist his aphrodisiac gas?
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Re: Brickhouse's Adventures in Malanga City!

Postby jrhcl2 » November 24th, 2013, 12:23 pm

Mr. Cryptic wrote:
jrhcl2 wrote:Hello Mr. Cryptic!! Interesting start. But I do have a questions, does this story start before the first Victory legion story # 1-13 ?? Where the Dr. enslaved Ishtar and made her help him with his marriage??


Yes, this takes place before the Victory Legion series.

jrhcl2 wrote:I also have some questions about Prospero now that he has been defeated. While Ishtar was under Prospero spell she shared her knowledge of magic with him and later provided him with the method of getting the prana he needed to power his spells. First since Ishtar can reach across time and space and travel to different dimensions, why wouldnt Prospero be able to do that? Second why doesn't Prospero know where the gate is? Didn't Ishtar Share all her knowledge with him, while she was under his spell? Since he has Ishtar magical knowledge and he is more skills at using magic than Ishtar, he did defeat Ishtar ever time they faced off, wouldn't he know where the gate is? She did said everything I have is yours, when Ishtar was his slave!! I've been meaning to ask those questions, but I keep forgetting.


Prospero didn't learn every last thing that Ishtar knows, just some of her magical knowledge. He focused mainly on spells relating to domination and erotic technique. Prospero didn't defeat Ishtar everytime. At the end of the Prospero saga, she defeated him (Panthera Khan getting Prospero while he was having sex with Ishtar was Ishtar's plan).


At the end of the Prospero saga was the first time Ishtar out smarted Prospero!! But everytime Prospero and Ishtar faced off face to face in a show down of magical skills Ishtar lost, even when Prospero was a (novice)!! Through out the whole Prospero saga he showed he was smarter and more skilled at using magic than Ishtar, even those Ishtar was supposed to be the big gun when it came to magic. As least for me , Prospero is the big gun now when it come to magic!! Ishtar is second best or maybe third best when it come to skill, the new girl on the block may be more skilled at using magic than Ishtar. Ishtar may not even be third, she may be the least skilled of any of the magic user, she may not be able to defeat any of the guild's magic user!! Even those Ishtar may have more magical knowledge and magical powers, she hasn't been shown to be very skilled at using her magical powers!! Prospero being the prime example!! You said Prospero was supposed to be the big gun when it come to the villains!! I think Prospero is the biggest gun of all !! be it villain or hero!! None of the heroes can face him one on one and win, to include Ishtar, she needed help!! He's in another league !! Lord Prospero is the most powerful being in the Crypticverse, as least to me, not Ishtar, after seeing her in this saga I wouldn't say Ishtar is the greatest hero, i'd say Ishtar is in the middle of the pack!! As least for me, Ishtar wasn't the hero I believed her to be!! For me Ishtar was a real disappointment for most of the Lord Prospero Saga. I wouldn't be honest if i didn't say that this saga didn't make me think less of Ishtar as heroine!!

Ishtar has been headlined as this powerful goddess and the heroine that all the villains should fear, and that heroes trust and believe in!! (But this saga proved there's nothing special about Ishtar as a hero!!) I know Ishtar plan worked out in the end. But Ishtar never defeated Prospero when they face off face to face with her magical skills, Prospero always won!! She had to be saved thru out the whole saga by her fellow heroes. Again for me, you have played Ishtar up to be the most powerful heroine in the world and the Queen of the Gods!! How can Ishtar be said to be the greatest hero of them all, when she couldn't handled a guy who started out as a simple (novice) mage ???? :?: I've even looked up the word (novice), it means (new), (inexperienced), (beginner)!! Ishtar couldn't handle a (beginner)!!! (I still love Ishtar and she is my favorite character)!! But, it is a big deal to me that a Goddess with her years of training, her years of experience, her magical knowledge and her power level, looked not very smart, unskilled, and was made to look like a minor league sorceress and hero by a (novice) mage!! I also felted the same way about the ROD story, with the American Goddess getting defeated by a (powerless) thug. This is the big reason why I don't think she's very good at being a hero. As least for me, a Goddess, a being with her magical powers and magical knowledge should be able to defeat foes like theses!!

Interesting update!! Is Brickhouse finally admitting she like to be mind controlled by the villains!! It explain why it seem she's always attacking her fellow heroes!! Over the few years I've been follow her adventures she's always worked for the villains against the heroes, she has always been the play toy of any villain she has faced, being only able to beat their henchmen never the main villain. This is a question I've always ask about Brickhouse is she really a hero or does she really want to be the slave of a villain?? Is she really a hero or want to be super villain??
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Re: Brickhouse's Adventures in Malanga City!

Postby Mr. Cryptic » November 26th, 2013, 11:07 pm

I don't really have anything else to say about Ishtar and how powerful or not powerful she it. Prospero is really powerful, like you said. Let's just see what happens in future stories and MC Comix and HIP Comix.

jrhcl2 wrote: Interesting update!! Is Brickhouse finally admitting she like to be mind controlled by the villains!! It explain why it seem she's always attacking her fellow heroes!! Over the few years I've been follow her adventures she's always worked for the villains against the heroes, she has always been the play toy of any villain she has faced, being only able to beat their henchmen never the main villain. This is a question I've always ask about Brickhouse is she really a hero or does she really want to be the slave of a villain?? Is she really a hero or want to be super villain??


Yes, Brickhouse has a weakness for being seduced and mind controlled. This is Mind Control Comix, of course, but she in particular has a vulnerability to being controlled and manipulated. I don't know that she wants to be a villain exactly, but people are corruptible.
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Re: Brickhouse's Adventures in Malanga City!

Postby Mr. Cryptic » December 5th, 2013, 4:18 am

Candice Carlson, AKA Brickhouse, has completely fallen under the power of the Gangster of Love's aphrodisiac gas!
What will he do with her now that she has no desire other than to please him?
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Re: Brickhouse's Adventures in Malanga City!

Postby Mr. Cryptic » December 19th, 2013, 2:53 am

Brickhouse AKA Candice Carlson's adventure in the City of Supervillains has led her to fall into the hands of the seductive Gangster of Love!
Now completely under his sexual spell, Candice will do absolutely anything the Gangster commands her to do!
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Re: Brickhouse's Adventures in Malanga City!

Postby jrhcl2 » January 10th, 2014, 5:33 pm

Good installment!! But the new cover in the covers gallery of a new character has me wondering who she is ? You know I like to guess what the plot is, I has a theory, but first let me give you the reasons for my theory. The gangster of love turned Brickhouse into his slave, giving her a new identity the muscle Goddess, I guessing she's going to be a villain for a while. I thinking his next target could be Ishtar, because of their past history and the defeats he has suffered at her hands. Brickhouse has the power to defeat Ishtar, I now think Brickhouse is stronger than Ishtar. Why i think Brickhouse can overpower Ishtar, based on Ishtar history, First in her test of wills with Ultra Maxima, Maxima will was strong enough to cause Ishtar to be overheated with her own prana, second her face down with Hypnotic, Ishtar was only able to hold off Hypnotic's power for a short time before she was again overheated with her own prana, third with her face off with Prospero, her magic wasn't able to stop Prospero from turning her magical garments into slave shackles, that was a prolong struggle, she used a lot of prana. I think if Ishtar and Brickhouse got into a prolonged battle of strength Ishtar would use a lot of prana and would become overheated with her own prana, overheated with her own prana ,Ishtar would be helpless. The gangster of love could use his drug to make Ishtar his slave, having Ishtar use her magic, her rings of transformation can change the form and properties of her garments, and change her appearance like it does when she changes to her Maria Jones identities, plus Rock Solid kind of looks like Ishtar. That my theory and my reasons for believe this could be part of the plot of the story. The Gangster of love enslaving heroines, changing their identities, controlling their minds and having them do as he wills.
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Re: Brickhouse's Adventures in Malanga City!

Postby Mr. Cryptic » January 15th, 2014, 8:34 am

jrhcl2 wrote:Good installment!! But the new cover in the covers gallery of a new character has me wondering who she is ? You know I like to guess what the plot is, I has a theory, but first let me give you the reasons for my theory. The gangster of love turned Brickhouse into his slave, giving her a new identity the muscle Goddess, I guessing she's going to be a villain for a while. I thinking his next target could be Ishtar, because of their past history and the defeats he has suffered at her hands. Brickhouse has the power to defeat Ishtar, I now think Brickhouse is stronger than Ishtar. Why i think Brickhouse can overpower Ishtar, based on Ishtar history, First in her test of wills with Ultra Maxima, Maxima will was strong enough to cause Ishtar to be overheated with her own prana, second her face down with Hypnotic, Ishtar was only able to hold off Hypnotic's power for a short time before she was again overheated with her own prana, third with her face off with Prospero, her magic wasn't able to stop Prospero from turning her magical garments into slave shackles, that was a prolong struggle, she used a lot of prana. I think if Ishtar and Brickhouse got into a prolonged battle of strength Ishtar would use a lot of prana and would become overheated with her own prana, overheated with her own prana ,Ishtar would be helpless. The gangster of love could use his drug to make Ishtar his slave, having Ishtar use her magic, her rings of transformation can change the form and properties of her garments, and change her appearance like it does when she changes to her Maria Jones identities, plus Rock Solid kind of looks like Ishtar. That my theory and my reasons for believe this could be part of the plot of the story. The Gangster of love enslaving heroines, changing their identities, controlling their minds and having them do as he wills.


Rocksolid Rhonda looks a lot like Ishtar, but she's not Ishtar. I think the hair is a big part of it. Ishtar's hair is a figure called Amarseda hair by AprilYSH at DAZ studio. It's my favorite hair figure for many reasons (it looks good, it poses in many ways easily), and I overuse it. I have a little more money now than I used to, so I need to invest in a few more hair figures.

This story is much smaller in scale than the Prospero story that came before it. This one is really focused on Brickhouse. It's a little more porno than some of my other stories, because it's all about Candice having adventures in a city full of supervillains eager to seduce superheroines.
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Re: Brickhouse's Adventures in Malanga City!

Postby Mr. Cryptic » January 15th, 2014, 10:08 pm

Candice Carlson, the superheroine known as Brickhouse, has been enslaved by the Gangster of Love!
Given the villainess alias of "Muscle Goddess," she is pressed into service as an enforcer for the Triskelion Guild crime syndicate!
Her first mission is to punish a supervillainess who's been cheating her bosses!
Her target is Rocksolid Rhonda, a sexy and powerful mutant with the ability to transform to curvaceous living stone!
Has Brickhouse met her match!?
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Re: Brickhouse's Adventures in Malanga City!

Postby Mr. Cryptic » January 31st, 2014, 4:08 am

Candice is under the Gangster of Love's spell and cannot resist as he leads the superheroine through one sexy adventure after another!
Now he has another curvacious superwoman under his thumb, Rocksolid Rhonda!
What does he have planned for his love slaves!?
Victory City #54 also introduces a buff cutie from the Isle of the Amazons, Lady Aleesha!
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Re: Brickhouse's Adventures in Malanga City!

Postby jrhcl2 » February 12th, 2014, 8:29 pm

Hello Mr. Cryptic !! I'm really liking this storyline, not a lot of fighting, not a lot of drama, just straight to the point. Lot of sex!! that's always good!! But like always I have some questions, is Rocksolid Rhonda stronger than Brickhouse?? I thought these only one that came close to her strength level was Ishtar. Rocksolid Rhonda was able to pick up Brickhouse easily and brickhouse couldn't break her grip. I noticed you feature a lot of women with muscles, Brickhouse, Ultra, Rocksolid Rhonda. American Goddess and Ishtar or in between, some muscles, their shoulders and arms. But Ishtar and American Goddess have feminism line too, their legs, hips, butt, and chest, their pretty faces. but Ocelot woman and Sonic Siren have very feminism line. Which is your favorite body type? :D
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