sohta123 wrote:Awesome! Can't wait for the next episode!
Interesting story so far.
PS. Do you have a blog?
Hector2 wrote:Dear Firstborn:
This story begins in the middle of the adventure. I think “Sharon” was taken by the obviously evil villain with fangs, red eyes and blue skin guy that seems conspicuously as a vampire and that talks about the heroines as mere “mortals”, only to be converted into another vampire and set a trap for DayStar.
Page 3 seems to be full of cryptic clues, could it be that the purple rock is this universe’s version of Kriptonite? And why Daystar is so impressed by the Tiara? ( Incidentally, Superman is vulnerable to magic too).
Hector2 wrote:The tiara seems to do it’s work, but the page that I loved most was page 5, when Sharon is carried on DayStar’s arms. It’s a touching scene when we see that Sharon, still as a vampire, has feelings for DayStar. A lot of this site focus in sexual domination, but this is most about a way to achieve unrequited love.
Hector2 wrote:What happened in pages 8 – 10? I am not really sure, but it seems like Vampire Sharon could not bite DayStar. And about page 8, I remember have read that when Dracula tried to bite superman, given that the man of steel draws his power for the SUN, Dracula exploded by drinking his blood.
Hector2 wrote:
And what about the place DayStar’s soul awakened? If I saw a guy like that, I would say that “hell” is a very poor choice of words. And now you have an homage to “Spawn”? The problem is, that guy was a mercenary and this gal is a true blue superheroine, she will not be turned to the Dark Side so easy, won’t she?
Awesome story, I can’t wait to see more!
hypno85 wrote:Next time can you make Balloon Words Size bigger?
kakyo001 wrote:hmm... there'll hardly anyone left to be in the Unit if they become evil themself before the Unit itself had its official debut
dunno how "permanent" the corruption is... claims by evil forces aren't always true...
(i hope for a redemption... )
FirstBorn wrote:kakyo001 wrote:hmm... there'll hardly anyone left to be in the Unit if they become evil themself before the Unit itself had its official debut
dunno how "permanent" the corruption is... claims by evil forces aren't always true...
(i hope for a redemption... )
-- So far DayStar is the only founding member who has turned evil. Haywire has some naughty nannites in her system but she is otherwise still her pristine, if somewhat anti-social self.
But have no fear, there will be plenty of heroines in the O.U. by its full screen debut. Not all of them are going to get full fleshed origin story's though or it will be 10 years before I get to tell an "Avengers" style plot.
As for hopes for redemption, I'm playing that one close to the chest. What I can say is that even after her fall, DayStar still has a role to play in the meta-plot (and not just as a bad guy). Hopefully the following chapters will give enough foreshadowing to back that statement up. I'll have to wait and see how it goes over when their go live.
Thanks for the comments!
kakyo001 wrote:my comment was by no means criticism...
Adon wrote:I like it when everyone, hero and villain, has to earn what they accomplish. For me, at least, my eyes tend to glaze over when the villains dominate the heroines without any sort of effort or indication that this is an extraordinary feat. It's one of my issues with the Superheroine Squad, for that matter -- we are told that they are well-respected heroines, but most of the time we see them lose, lose badly, and often with pitiful ease. To me, that doesn't really make the villains look strong, it just makes the heroines look weak and that their competence is an informed ability without anything to back it up.
MacroLass wrote:I actually AGREE with your point. There should be some kind of effort exerted and/or resistance to overcome when controlling someone to make it a more worthwhile achievement. But often the sad truth is that that is a luxury you just can't afford within the confines of a comic.
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