hey gang!
thanks for the awesome feedback, keep'em coming! now to answer questions without giving it all away
Much more interesting for the story is Miranda and 42 visit to Kitten. Miranda surprises me, it’s like a teenager showing her crush to her best friend. Also I find strange the mention of “the other woman” and Miranda seems to be very surprised by that mention (“I forget how smart you’re really are!). Could it be that Miranda has no memory of his time as “herself” (Clarissa)?
Kitten proven to be a very smart kitty-kat, so she's connected the dots when Miranda(Clarissa then) was speaking of another woman, namely 42. It caught Miranda by surprise that she was able to make such a vague connection.
Miranda seems very ignorant of human interactions… or clone interactions if you will. 42 has a name. It obviously matter to her, but Miranda doesn’t notice. I hope Kitten could use her discovering of Dawn’s free will to her advantage.
Being Ignorant or pretending not to notice?
So, Violet to the rescue? And just like that, defeated by Ishtar? Well, it makes sense, Ishtar is a goddess, so Violet makes an “concrete angel” and gets sent to cell 12. I wonder how will that do.
This story rules, and now we have almost 7 comics. Maybe you will initiate another story, so I want to show you what I was talking about when I mentioned “The Flint movies”
Did you notice any influence in the “agents”?
Ah! Mesa see the light! Cool, pretty damn close too, thou alot of the 60's had women always in sexy uniforms, so goes without saying
Got my new sub today and woah, love what you've done mctek! All the heroines look great in their obedient Zombot states, but I love what you've done to PP, this could be THE kid of Mind Control scenario I've always wanted her to be in, and she looks amazing (Have you made her younger, or just changed up her look slightly? Either way, its hawt. :3). Looking super forward to the future issues! X3
thanks for rejoining AngelicOne! And thanks for reading ^_^ glad you're enjoying the story feel free to critique it! Dunno about being the Kid, still got a long way to go, gunna take me forever to catch up to Fin. You know i just noticed the changes, might have added an extra shader by accident.
Page 7 on: Miranda meeting 42 to Kitten. Does she think Kitten will approve? Miranda became a monster to Kittens eyes I think, but mentions Terra Creed, and we see weakness. Kitten will exploit this?
then Ick calls her. Miranda's loyalty to Ick is total here. She cannot even disobey to stay longer with her love and her friend! it looks like there is no hope for Miranda at all. Kitten may escape without her friend.
Miranda as Clarissa has been her friend since she can remember, while she's still obeying her father, she still considers Kitten her best friend, With Kitten, it's not so much she's a monster, but trapped on the wrong side as it wore. So they're friendship is being put to the test ^_^
page 19: Why did Ick call Miranda, what more does he do and want her to be in charge of? also, why does Agent Cross only have a headphone? Is she different?
Why does he keep calling for her and referencing her? hrmmmm...As for Cross, Ick probably finds it amusing that someone from the far future is being subdued by tech so outdated it's not funny.
Page 20-21: Stating directives. very tantalizing, no thoughts than what Ick has programed. it seems hopeless, Ick has fully converted these heroines into perfect instruments of his will. and wants to take over the world!
More of that to come!
I've normally been just a lurker on the forums, but this story is so cool that I just had to comment.
I love what's happened so far. Now that Omega Woman has been subdued, I wonder how long it will be before she too dons the uniform of a Zombot. And if that happens, what hope is there for the world?
The only small complaint that I do have is that I'd like to see a little more of the conversion process itself. I'm guessing that McTek wants to move the story along (and that's perfectly fine), but I was kind of looking forward to seeing even a short montage showing the new Zombots being created. We don't need to see every single conversion in detail, like they do with the graydrones in the "Convert Another" stories, but after seeing their capture, just a peek at their "processing" would be the topping on the cake. I hope we'll see that if Omega Woman is next on the list.
Can't wait for lucky #7!
^_^ Welcome to the forums anne! ^_^; I see what i can do about conversions, at this rate i'm gunna go thru the whole cast that way. Yeah, Omega Woman got her tail kicked rather hard. Lets hope for a round 2!
thanks again for all the comments, keep them coming!
Tek~
