Grime City Stories: Body Image

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Grime City Stories: Body Image

Postby Trishbot » May 26th, 2010, 10:20 pm

Hey everyone!
This is the official section to for the latest Grime City Story, "Body Image", staring the strong and sexy Valient Grrl! Feel free to post any questions, comments, feedback, opinions, advice, suggestions, or general banter you want here about the comic and stay tuned to find out what naughty mischief and sexy shenanigans Valient Grrl, and a few of her friends, will get into!
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Re: Grime City Stories: Body Image

Postby Trishbot » May 26th, 2010, 10:21 pm

Hey everyone! I'm really excited, 'cause this is my first official Member's Gallery update!

Valient Grrl has gone to a photoshoot with Metro Men's Magazine to bolster her self-confidence and improve her image amongst the general public after a disastrous and destructive battle with the supervillain Aria! And all seems to be going extremely well for the superheroine-turned-supermodel.... that is until she begins to feel rather sleepy, sexy, and suggestible! Is it purely nerves getting to her, or is there something more sinister brewing behind the scenes? Find out how Valient Grrl's sessions goes in "Body Image" issue 2, only at MCComix!

You can find the story in the Member's Gallery here: http://www.mccomix.com/members/gallery2 ... emId=10663

Or feel free to sample the first chapter in the Free Gallery here: http://www.mccomix.com/gallery2/main.php?g2_itemId=6027

Okay everyone! I hope you enjoy, and there's going to be plenty more naughty superhero mind control coming your way soon!
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Re: Grime City Stories: Body Image

Postby Northern Chill » May 27th, 2010, 8:37 pm

A very nice chapter....love how Valient Grrl slowly succumbed to the mind control with the progress shown in her eyes. Great text accompanying the art as well..."juggy juggernaut" indeed...:)...I was kinda disappointed Cleo is in on the control part. It would have been nice to see her and Valient do a steamy mindless session....oh well.

Great work!...can't wait for part 3!
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Re: Grime City Stories: Body Image

Postby Trishbot » June 23rd, 2010, 10:32 pm

Hi y'all! Akonkid and I are back with a new, sexy installment of "Body Image" for you guys to enjoy!

When Valient Grrl agreed to pose for a popular men's magazine, she could never have anticipated being deceived by the photographer and hypnotized into mindless obedience by a trick camera! While the sexy superheroine may have had self-image issues prior to the shoot, her new masters are quick to appreciate her womanly attributes in ways she could never have imagined! But what other degrading things do her captors have planned, and will Valient Grrl ever manage to break free from their insidious hold over her empty mind and nubile body? Found out in "Body Image" #3, only at MCComix!

See the naughtiness here: http://www.mccomix.com/members/gallery2/main.php?g2_itemId=11668

I hope you all enjoy! We have a lot more in store that's sure to please all you fans, so stay tuned and thanks for supporting MCComix!
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Re: Grime City Stories: Body Image

Postby dumbtime » June 24th, 2010, 12:54 pm

I wonder if it felt like she was hitting a brick wall when Cleo popped VG on the jaw. It would have taken a shot a lot hard than that to even register any sensation, knowing VG's physical resolve.

I love the direction this is going. Here's hoping they take every advantage of the mindless bimbo while they have her at their mercy.
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Re: Grime City Stories: Body Image

Postby tomcat » June 29th, 2010, 7:43 pm

In my humble opinion, this must be the hottest story since Marcy's got her first implant back in Carnal knowledge which was where I first fell in love with this world.

So sorry, no questions or suggestions. Just wanted to say thanks.
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Re: Grime City Stories: Body Image

Postby Doctor Robo » June 29th, 2010, 8:55 pm

This story has quickly become a must-read. I am enjoying the fresh new villains, and Valient Grrl has never looked better. Keep up the great work!

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Re: Grime City Stories: Body Image

Postby madcap » July 4th, 2010, 9:44 am

I have to admit that I ignored this story until recently. Often I will look at the thumbnails of a new story and if it doesn't appear to have any mind control in it, I will put off reading it until the story gets going, as I'd rather wait and read a chunk at one time that at least "gets to the good stuff" than just read set up and be left wanting more.

So I finally read the first three chapters and I must say I am really enjoying where this is going. Trish, I love that you're having the villains make Valiant Grrl do humiliating things like licking their boots, and I enjoyed the way you described the reasoning behind it. There haven't been a lot of stories that get into that "humiliation" aspect of it (I suppose because a mindless slave technically can't be humiliated, but as you say, there's a whole symbolic angle to it that still makes it highly erotic from the controller's perspective). That kind of degradation suggests a super high degree of control that goes far beyond the simple obedience of someone performing sex acts that they normally would not do. So I appreciate that you "get" that aspect of the whole mind control thing and that you've worked it into your story. I greatly look forward to seeing where this story goes from here! How long do you envision this one being?

Oh, and Akonkid's art--fantastic as always! He is getting better and better with each new chapter he puts on the site!
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Re: Grime City Stories: Body Image

Postby Trishbot » July 6th, 2010, 10:37 pm

Thanks for the feedback, everyone! We're having a BLAST with this series!

To answer a few questions - Originally, we planned on Body Image lasting a mere 2-3 chapters. Well, my significant other got a bit carried away and we currently have enough content for at least 10 chapters, and there will likely be more. He's said so himself, but the stuff he's done is by far the best and hottest work he's yet produced, and I'm very excited and eager to show you all the finish product when the next update slot is available.

That said, we may or may not be delaying some of it slightly to make way for much-needed resolutions to "Hypnotica" and "Mind Over Magic". While we already have 9 chapters of Body Image done, there's some story details tied to both these other stories, as well as other stories, that might spoil a few surprises if these issues come out first. I'll be working with Fin to get wrap up "Hypnotica" and "Mind Over Magic" soon so that won't be an issue.

And let me just say that if you all are liking what you've seen so far, you will be absolutely blown away by what's coming up soon.
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Re: Grime City Stories: Body Image

Postby Northern Chill » July 7th, 2010, 2:41 pm

Trishbot wrote:Thanks for the feedback, everyone! We're having a BLAST with this series!

To answer a few questions - Originally, we planned on Body Image lasting a mere 2-3 chapters. Well, my significant other got a bit carried away and we currently have enough content for at least 10 chapters, and there will likely be more. He's said so himself, but the stuff he's done is by far the best and hottest work he's yet produced, and I'm very excited and eager to show you all the finish product when the next update slot is available.

That said, we may or may not be delaying some of it slightly to make way for much-needed resolutions to "Hypnotica" and "Mind Over Magic". While we already have 9 chapters of Body Image done, there's some story details tied to both these other stories, as well as other stories, that might spoil a few surprises if these issues come out first. I'll be working with Fin to get wrap up "Hypnotica" and "Mind Over Magic" soon so that won't be an issue.

And let me just say that if you all are liking what you've seen so far, you will be absolutely blown away by what's coming up soon.


Good news to hear, Trish! You and Akonkid are doing great work on this series and I know the best is yet to come....hopefully not too long to wait.
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Re: Grime City Stories: Body Image

Postby bluemax2 » July 9th, 2010, 9:20 am

Trish and Akonkid:
Great work.
The longer the story lasts the better.
The more mind control the better.

Maybe it can segway into a Unity sequel?
One can only hope.

Thanks.

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Re: Grime City Stories: Body Image

Postby jarlaxxle » July 25th, 2010, 4:34 pm

Im really liking Body Image, almost as much as the Hypnotica series. Keep up the amazing work you too.

Ya got a fan for life in me :)
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Re: Grime City Stories: Body Image

Postby Akonkid » July 29th, 2010, 7:03 pm

Hey everyone. I got confused for awhile about which stories were due today, so I apologize this is being posted a tad later than usual. Totally my fault.

Hopefully the content makes up for it. ;)

Valient Grrl has been tricked into posing for Metro Men's Magazine, but has instead fallen under the control of the magazine's evil owners. Leo and Theo waste no time making preparations for using their new slave to the fullest, but before their grand scheme can be carried out they decide to work off some pent-up stress with the compliant crimefighter. With no choice but to obey, how much humiliating and degrading commands can Valient Grrl carry out before her fragile mind snaps completely? Find out in "Body Image" #4, exclusively at MCComix!

See the skin show here: http://www.mccomix.com/members/gallery2/main.php?g2_itemId=12820

Thanks for supporting MCComix! Enjoy the comic!
If she would just do what I asked, I wouldn't need to use mind control!
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Re: Grime City Stories: Body Image

Postby madcap » August 1st, 2010, 8:55 am

Trish and Akon, this chapter was fantastic! I loved the humiliation aspect of this one, which really drove home the depth of the control the villains have over Valient Grrl. The opening shot of Cleopatra insulting her mindlessness while fondling her breasts as she stands there helplessly? Hot!

And of course, the "acting like a monkey" bit...while acting like a monkey in itself is not exactly sexy, the helplessness that her acting that way conveys is extremely erotic. So that was a nice dichotomy there, and Akon, I love the way you still have her arms in the monkey position during the blowjob on pages 48 and 49. And then the way her arms continue to stay motionless on page 50, as the two goons double-teamed her...to illustrate that she is not a participant in this sex so much as a mindless recepticle. Fantastic! It's not until her masters ask her if she's a horny slut that she actually begins to take any action at all. These little details in the art and story are certainly noticed and appreciated.

And of course, the scene where she kneels before her masters and mistress covered in cum while they talk about her being in her proper place is fantastic. I cannot wait to see where this story is going to go next!
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Re: Grime City Stories: Body Image

Postby Northern Chill » August 1st, 2010, 2:33 pm

A very hot and spicy chapter to this deepening serial. Some specific thoughts:

1)On page 47, when Leo offers his dick to Valient Grrl as a banana for her monkey state, I wonder if it crossed his mind that monkeys tend to eat bananas one piece at a time? That could have been a very painful lesson for Leo.... :lol:

2) A general thought: I really think thrallium is getting overused as a plot device in all Metrobay based stories. I know it looks great in art and is very handy for the mind control element but seeing it crop up in nearly every tale reminds me a bit of Superman writers overindulging in bringing kryptonite into comic stories of the 60's and 70's. Personally, either expand what thrallium can do beyond MC (physical tf , side effects, instability in large quantities) or dial back the usage a bit, imo.

3) Great art in this serial....Akonkid's version of VG is different than Finister but no less alluring. She's never looked more ripped, for certain.

I'm eagerly looking forward to seeing what happens in future chapters..keep up the great work..:D
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