Very nice work

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Very nice work

Postby Tecknophyle » September 10th, 2009, 1:01 pm

In my opinion, those last two images in the first "Changing of the Guard" series are the best I've seen of your work.
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Re: Very nice work

Postby madcap » September 10th, 2009, 9:38 pm

I have to agree. The machine looks amazing, and the last two pages with the eye beams are flat out awesome. The facial expressions, the beams themselves, the body language--all extremely well done! You've really outdone yourself this time, Fin!

And I have to say that I'm appreciating little details too like the muscle definition in Erica's legs. I like that you don't just use the same model for every character...because different people have different musculatures, and you've captured that in your work!
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Re: Very nice work

Postby finister » September 16th, 2009, 9:14 pm

Thanks a lot madcap and Tecknophyle!!

If there are certain body gestures or mannerisms of mc'd heroines you'd like see please let me know.

Thanks again for the kind comments!!
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Re: Very nice work

Postby mkmngr » September 24th, 2009, 11:39 am

Perhaps an obvious "give-away" sign of the mc'd superheroine (or subjugated civilian, prison wardress and policewoman) is the pose where their hands rest, fingers straight down, alongside their thighs - in effect, "at attention"; you've captured this well with the "re-wired" Erica in CotG2 and also, looking back, some of the scenes of the subjugated Mayor after she has been "greentoothed".

Another sign of a re-ordered brain might be a more upright stance- such as the moment when Erica, power-locked inside the Psych-slaver, realises that she is REALLY in trouble when the Warden snaps to attention. Perhaps the mc'd victim should always be fitted with stiletto-heeled boots to alter their stance?

You don't need the re-wired victims to be naked - the subtle changes in their stance would be a great give-away that "her mind is no longer her own". Especially when she walks in, dressed in her civilian clothes, carrying a Greentooth "Pacifier" concealed in her hand ready to capture her target female for subjugation.

I'm tempted to suggest that you design a smaller head-set for Erica and other subjugated superheroines, lodged (or perhaps locked - give us a close-up of the earpiece latching around the back of her ear as she is enslaved) in one ear, with a thin microphone wand extending along her jaw-line (to end in a sinister green glowing LED). These would look more normal; I suspect that Ms Giolla's first headset for her enslaved cop looks like a set of Bugs Bunny ears and would not blend in when Erica goes out to capture more "recruits" for Ms Giolla's domination process.

Superb artwork, inspiring stories - please keep up the good work.

Mike :)
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Re: Very nice work

Postby finister » September 24th, 2009, 12:25 pm

Thanks for the suggestions, Mike!!

Much appreciated.

A lot of the gadgets and the way the demeanor of the MC'd babes is shown in Dr Robo's stories is dictated by him. I will direct him to this thread so he can read your suggestions as well!!

Stiletto heels eh? I can do that. Any other specific type of clothes/costumes you all would like to see?

Donovan's hat antenna may be too big eh? I''l have to see what Dr Robo thinks about that as well... but I know he too really appreciates the feedback/suggestions!
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Re: Very nice work

Postby Doctor Robo » September 24th, 2009, 8:22 pm

You guys make some good points. I'm sure you've all noticed by now that I am a big fan of outward, if only subtle, displays of enslavement. Posture is definitely a big one, as is the character 'wearing' the technology that enslaves her.

A quick point of clarification: the headset that Erica is wearing with her new cop uniform is not a controller, but simply a communicator. She is controlled by the rewiring of her mind while sitting in the Psycho-slaver machine. The earpiece is just a slick new way for Belinda and Marcia to contact her while she is in the field.

That said, I can see how it is a little gaudy. Perhaps down the road Erica's mistresses will see fit to give her something a little less conspicuous. :)

Thanks for the feedback!

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Re: Very nice work

Postby Akonkid » September 26th, 2009, 12:35 am

I rather like the ear-covering communication device. It's practical, sleek, and functional. Without it, the outfit would still be sexy, but it would be a bit more bland. That extra headgear pushes that "robo-girl" look to the next level, at least in my opinion. I just like it. :P
If she would just do what I asked, I wouldn't need to use mind control!
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