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Tales of....

Postby mctek » December 11th, 2009, 2:41 pm

Well that sucked for doc robo and ppl, that's a lotttt of hard work to go into, specially this time of year. The worse i got was my account deleted. XD in anycase this is a repost of what i got.
Working on finals exams atm. More to come later!
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Tales of....Enter the ring mistress

Cover: could be Ring mistress holding some of the small nano "enslavement" balls

page 1:

action: A quiet home scene, silver satin is relaxing maybe watching something

Dialogue: (TV) And in other news (place heroine name here) has been reporty stopped a major
bank heist.

Page 2:

action: Close up on Mary head and shoulders, Mary doesn't notice the a gloved hand holding a odd
device in her hand (like the concept picture, the wires don't have to be there.)

Dialogue: (TV) ...And now for the news.
Page 3:

Action: The device is slapped in place as Mary reacts to the device.

Dialogue: Ring Mistress: GOTCHA!

Silver Satin: Ack!
Page 4:

Action: We see Silver satin stand up in a panic as the device quickly takes over!


Dialogue:

Silver Satin: (robotic Monotone) Slave girl Trojan uploaded! starting enslavement program:
body control......OK!
Mental control....OK!
Cyborg system control....one moment..........OK!
Rebooting...

Action: Silver satin drops her head, almost a birds eye view, dramatic angle please.

Page 5:

Action: Extreme close of Silver Satins face as her eyes go pupils go white with a black ring,
her hair slightly darkens.

Dialogue:

Silver Satin: Reboot complete, welcome Ring mistress!

Action: Ring mistress steps into the light, triumphant in her capture of Silver Satin!

Ring Mistress: Well now cutie now it's time for your friends!

Page 6:

Action: Brown sugar and Valor girl are on patrol and stopped at the rooftop of a building.
Dialogue:

Valor girl: Argh! when I get my powers back..(rubbing a sore hand)

Brown Sugar: Don't worry so much, I don't have powers and I still get by.

Page 7:

Action: Valor girl reflexes as small strange colored ball hits her. Brown sugar is turning
around reacting to the confusion.

Dialouge: Valor girl: Ack!

Brown Sugar: Valor girl!

Page 8:

Action: The small ball had grown and encase the heroine, she now stood at attention inside the ball.

Dialogue:

Ring Mistress: GOTCHA!

Action: Brown Sugar tries to avoid a second ball as valor girl vanishes(teleported to Ring
Mistress lair)

Dialogue:

Brown Sugar: NO!.

Page 9:

Action: Brown Sugar is encased at attention inside the ball as Silver Satin and her Mistress
land near her.

Silver Satin: Hostiles capture..
Valor girl: enslavement program at 60% since capture.
Brown Sugar: Enslavement program commencing...

Action: Brown Sugar is teleported away

Ring mistress: Some heroines, that was too easy! I thought they would be tough!(pouts)

Page 10

Action: A quick shot of valor girl and Brown Sugar in the larger bubble gum dispenser, Valor
girl's costume has match the colors and theme of Ring mistress put fit, her pupils white with a
black ring around them.
Dialogue:

Computer/Silver satin: Enslavement of Valor Girl complete...


Page 11:
Action: Pan over to Brown Sugar who is halfway there, unable to combat the take over of her
mind. Her costume slowly changing it's appearance as well.

Dialogue:

Computer/Silver satin: Enslavement of Brown sugar at 50%

Caption: To be continued...
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Re: Tales of....

Postby mctek » December 11th, 2009, 2:42 pm

rest of the concept ideas!

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Re: Tales of....

Postby madcap » December 12th, 2009, 9:46 am

I'm glad you reposted this. This has a lot of potential, and since Brown Sugar and Silver Satin are my two favorite heroines to see controlled, I am digging this idea quite a bit! (Love the color sketch!)
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Re: Tales of....

Postby bluemax2 » December 15th, 2009, 9:43 am

Mctek:
We can't wait to see your story get posted either formally done by one of the site's fantastic artists or maybe in its raw form as only your sketches posted to the free section???
Anyhow, keep up the great work and ideas.
In hopes of seeing this new story come to fruition.

By the way have you thought of any balletboots and catsuits to add to the mindcontrolled slaves' outfits?

regards,

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Re: Tales of....

Postby mctek » December 17th, 2009, 8:43 pm

hey thanks for the interest guys!

Madcap: dude, just finish the second story, Brown sugar isn't used a lot though. And i did lie to myself about making it a 2 part thing, should be at least one more, hopefully you'll like what i have in store for Brown Sugar!

BlueMax2: ^_^ i would too! personally i would like to see finister do it, still that's up to them. As for the sketch things, i'll post from time to time, thought honestly I would rather do it in 3d to better help myself in learning 3D. As soon as i can open up my daz collection stuff. I should be right as rain. As for the balletboots, ^_^; i looked them up, though really didn't like them, I'm sure someone can fit them in. Just not to wild for them myself.

In any case here is part 2....part 3 is on my list to do, finals are done so i have more time to work on it. reason for making it longer is that i had more story to tell, so rather then cut out a huge nice idea, i decided to run with it. Now as for some of the stuff being used, such as the new item i came up with, the "Nano modifiers" all those items are while strong as hell, are temp at best, so no main or secondary character is getting any kind of perm change. With that said i hope you like part two!

MCtek~

Tales of....Enter the ring mistress part 2

Cover:

page 1:Alleyway

action: Pink Pussycat is on the run, at the moment she should be jumping (think Spider woman) to avoid a few of the colored nano capture balls being tossed by now enslaved speed demon girls.

Dialogue:

Rollergirl: Target: Pink Pussycat

Shadowrider: estimated capture time: 2 minutes

Daredoll: Action Cats Members Kitten, Fluffy, Purrjah, and Clawdette captured and being converted.

Pink Pussycat: Oh fluff bunnies, why me!

Caption: 2 days later and many heroines later...

Page 2:

action: (Close up, about mid waist, upside down) Pink Pussycat is in a jump, avoids more, but just has enough time to see the extra nano ball about to hit her chest.

Dialogue: Oh c.....


Page 3: Ring Mistress lair

Action: Ring Mistress is standing at a large screen with Max's Face on it. Both appear to be gloating about the current status of some of the heroines.

Dialogue:

RM: Well, as I said Maxy, all is going well Operation Distraction is going according to plan!

MI: You did well Ring Mistress, how about that other project you're working on.

RM: It's coming along, in fact I'll show you the work in progress Maxy boy!
Page 4:

Action: Valor girl and the call girl Trixi step into the light, it's clear that both have been modified again. They look more like twins now, with similar althelic builds. Both had blonde hair, though more made up to look like Trixi's hair.


Dialogue:

RM: As you can see my nano modifiers are working, the down side Maxy boy is that they are only modified so long as the master control unit is active. Working on that soon.

MI: Interesting, we'll work out a contract as soon as you work out all the "Kinks". If I may ask what is the master control unit?

Action: (panel 2) the panel show a face profile of one of the valor girls with ring mistress in the middle and the other valor girl of to her left, a few feet back. Silver satin's legs should be coming out of the shadow.

RM: Funny you should ask Maxy! Come here sugar!

Action: Silver Satin comes into full view (angled close up about head to knees) the disc on her forehead is gone instead is dress in a catsuit similar to ring mistress's down to the ring pattern. wearing thigh length high heel boots., her cybernetics still visible. The suit is now in control of Silver Satin

Dialogue RM: Ta da!

SS: Mistress this unit must inform you that the subject: Pink Pussycat has been captured and is currently being converted.

Page 5:

Action: Ring mistress and her new bodyguards the valor girls follow behind as Ring Mistress ends her talks with Max. The screen max was on should be turning off.

Dialogue:
Rm: that's my cue Maxy boy! I'll forward my results of the other later, tooties! (should be waving)


Action: A new wide shot of Pink Pussycat standing at attention inside her ball, her costume and eyes already taken on the look of her other slaves which now consist of the speed demons, The Action Cats, the Valor girls, Silver Satin, Brown Sugar and now Pink Pussycat. The other enslaved girls (minus the speed demons who are still out gathering slaves) should be at attention off to one side either in their alter costumes or nude.

Caption: Unlike earlier the conversion process into mindless slave has been sped up by the Ring Mistress, making it easier to grow her army of enslaved women!

Page 6:

Action: The ball opens up, and Pink Pussycat stands unmoving, staring straight ahead.

Dialogue:

PP: Awaiting your commands Mistress, your wishes are my code.

Rm: Please me then slave! Striptease for your Mistress!

Page 7:

Action: Pink Pussycat begins by pulling down her top her body swaying from side to side while the ring mistress looks on.

Dialogue: PP: As my Mistress commands me!

RM: (Evil smile) now this is a show!

Action: (panel 2) Ring mistress and her slaves look in the direction of the door to the lair as they hear a boom

Page 8:

Action: Mechana is seen knocking down the door as the mechanical woman is show angry.

Dialogue:

Mechana: Where is she!

RM: Hell! Valor girls stop her!

Action: The valor girls rush Mechana as she charges them as well!


Dialogue:

Valor girls: Yes Mistress!
Page 9:

Action: Mechana is no match for the twin Valor girls powers as they both punch her sending her flying to one of the walls.

Action: Mechana is slowly getting up, undaunted by the duo blocking her way.

Page 10

Action: (Close up on Mechana's face) her head arches back as a similar disc to the one Silver Satin was capture with is applied to Mechana.

Dialogue:

Mechana: ERROR! SYSTEM SHUTDOWN!


Page 11:

Action: The mechanical woman is now frozen due the neural blocker attach to her head effetely making her a statue.

Dialogue:

RM: Phew! That was close!, girls pack up the place time to move elsewhere before more heroines come! Pink Pussycat, Brown sugar and kitten to my room, your mistress needs some claiming down!

Action: The girls separate as they follow the orders of their Mistress, while ring Mistress takes Pink Pussycat and Kitten by the waist to her room.

Dialogue:

SS: (over head announcement) Capture of Snowflake complete! Processing enslavement now commencing!

Caption: To be continued...
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Re: Tales of....

Postby mctek » December 17th, 2009, 9:32 pm

oh if anyone wants to chat about the story or some suggestions via YIM, pm me and I'll send my ID i'll be on during the evenings do to work.

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Re: Tales of....

Postby bluemax2 » December 17th, 2009, 9:35 pm

mctek:
When are we going to see this story come to fruition?
I love the ideas especially if Finn or Akonkid drew it or maybe yourself? A new styled comic?
What about adding some spice to it with the robogirls wearing tight latex and especially, balletboots, as a sign of zombification?
Keep it up.

MindControl is always necessary.

regards,

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Re: Tales of....

Postby mctek » January 16th, 2010, 8:36 pm

Whoops sorry guys almost forgot about this. been doing college, work and other story stuff.


Bit of an update:

First off, the story has changed again. sadly i couldn't use alot of the core characters presented in the request due to story issues doc presented to me. So as result the story changed, thou honestly i think it's alot better then before. Currently it's on hold til Fin can clear some of the stuff on his plate. I would try to do it myself, but i'm kind of broke to buy some of the stuff need to make comics in DAZ studio, the luck of a starving artist i suppose. Going to keep the story hidden for a spell, so when it comes you'll possible be floored by it.(I hope)

Somethings i like to note, MANY THANKS to trishbot for making the Badass Wiki page, made my life easier, not having to remember tons and tons of characters on top of the ones i make in my own head. She's also a big help in knowing some current stuff to make this comic i've written work well. Honestly she deserves a BIG shout out from everyone for the stuff she does. Loving her current story too, the plot twists are great, it a great step in the right direction. Stories, especially Comic stories is very hard to master, keeping it engaging and interesting is part of story. Stories with lasting effects, good ones like Hypnotica, Wireless and the psychochair one(forgot the name shamefully) are goldmines in my opinion. I've seen people debate on the ongoing stories, and honestly i agree that you can't always reset the status quo, the real world doesn't reset itself every time something bad happens, having that with comics wither from here or elsewhere added a bit of intrigue and something people can related too. I'm not asking to kill, or permanetly change a character in a extreme way. Just that every ripple that the writers drop should linger a big, maybe it'll lead into something awesome and daring.


well enough ranting out of me!

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P.S. Everyone needs to give Trishbot a cookie!
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Re: Tales of....

Postby mctek » January 16th, 2010, 8:51 pm

One more thing...
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Re: Tales of....

Postby bluemax2 » January 19th, 2010, 9:51 am

Hey Mc:
As I mentioned before, I love the ideas you've thrown out. I see Akonkid has drawn his idea for Ringmistress. Very nice.
I do look forward to your juicy story seeing the light of day on McComix.
Keep the great ideas and sketches coming.

regards,

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Re: Tales of....

Postby mctek » January 19th, 2010, 1:01 pm

yup, awesome stuff from akon, but what does that mean!?! hehe.....

alright, now for something interesting for you guys, as you know i do hand drawn art. Thing is i've been doing alot of it on my computer for some time. Sadly, my wacom tablet i've had for 6 years is slowly and painfully dieing. Now i would take to get repaired if i could apparently were i live no one is trained in it's repair. So i'm left with the only option to buy a new one, trouble is a new one costs around $400.

So i would like to extend my service (freelance character and object conceptual artist) to anyone who would like to see there idea come alive in 2D. This extends to Doc, Fin and anyone here who requires said services. That said there are some rules i like to lay down now before you guys flood my pm box with requests.

1. NO CHILD PORN

2. No Torture, come on guys, they're alreadly bowing down to your will why hurt them like that?

3. I'm pretty open to some stuff, but If i say no, please do not make it an issue i'm not charging you for asking, But i do reserve my right to refuse something i feel is uncomfortable to me.

4. All prices vary, it can be 15 for a color single character, or 100 dollars for a 20 page black and white comic. I can do other stuff, just my speciality is character and object design. I can also do post production work, logos and so on.

5. Paypal....
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Re: Tales of....

Postby leto17 » February 9th, 2010, 7:02 am

How have things been progressing. Sorry I'm broke, but I hope things work out financially and you can make some stuff. You seem to be skilled at drawn art and developing poser capabilities nicely, which is very rare and excellent!
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Re: Tales of....

Postby mctek » February 9th, 2010, 11:48 pm

hey leto, right now i'm still in a crunch, even more so since work got major cut in hours. any little bit helps. As far as the story goes, dropping you and everyone here a teaser of what's to come. Not forgotten just been in development :twisted: also placing the updated version of my render up too, now with morph++ goodness!

I'll let you guys discuss my teaser :D thank Fin for letting me drop this in for you guys.

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Re: Tales of....

Postby mctek » March 1st, 2010, 12:05 am

Proudly presenting the heroines Sword and Shield in an origin story with a surprise ending you certainly won't forget! Naked action! Beautiful mind controlled women! All in awesome hand-drawn 2D art! Coming this Friday only at MCComix!

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Re: Tales of....

Postby leto17 » March 1st, 2010, 2:20 pm

Thanks! Looking forward to it!
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