Well that sucked for doc robo and ppl, that's a lotttt of hard work to go into, specially this time of year. The worse i got was my account deleted. XD in anycase this is a repost of what i got.
Working on finals exams atm. More to come later!
MCtek~
Tales of....Enter the ring mistress
Cover: could be Ring mistress holding some of the small nano "enslavement" balls
page 1:
action: A quiet home scene, silver satin is relaxing maybe watching something
Dialogue: (TV) And in other news (place heroine name here) has been reporty stopped a major
bank heist.
Page 2:
action: Close up on Mary head and shoulders, Mary doesn't notice the a gloved hand holding a odd
device in her hand (like the concept picture, the wires don't have to be there.)
Dialogue: (TV) ...And now for the news.
Page 3:
Action: The device is slapped in place as Mary reacts to the device.
Dialogue: Ring Mistress: GOTCHA!
Silver Satin: Ack!
Page 4:
Action: We see Silver satin stand up in a panic as the device quickly takes over!
Dialogue:
Silver Satin: (robotic Monotone) Slave girl Trojan uploaded! starting enslavement program:
body control......OK!
Mental control....OK!
Cyborg system control....one moment..........OK!
Rebooting...
Action: Silver satin drops her head, almost a birds eye view, dramatic angle please.
Page 5:
Action: Extreme close of Silver Satins face as her eyes go pupils go white with a black ring,
her hair slightly darkens.
Dialogue:
Silver Satin: Reboot complete, welcome Ring mistress!
Action: Ring mistress steps into the light, triumphant in her capture of Silver Satin!
Ring Mistress: Well now cutie now it's time for your friends!
Page 6:
Action: Brown sugar and Valor girl are on patrol and stopped at the rooftop of a building.
Dialogue:
Valor girl: Argh! when I get my powers back..(rubbing a sore hand)
Brown Sugar: Don't worry so much, I don't have powers and I still get by.
Page 7:
Action: Valor girl reflexes as small strange colored ball hits her. Brown sugar is turning
around reacting to the confusion.
Dialouge: Valor girl: Ack!
Brown Sugar: Valor girl!
Page 8:
Action: The small ball had grown and encase the heroine, she now stood at attention inside the ball.
Dialogue:
Ring Mistress: GOTCHA!
Action: Brown Sugar tries to avoid a second ball as valor girl vanishes(teleported to Ring
Mistress lair)
Dialogue:
Brown Sugar: NO!.
Page 9:
Action: Brown Sugar is encased at attention inside the ball as Silver Satin and her Mistress
land near her.
Silver Satin: Hostiles capture..
Valor girl: enslavement program at 60% since capture.
Brown Sugar: Enslavement program commencing...
Action: Brown Sugar is teleported away
Ring mistress: Some heroines, that was too easy! I thought they would be tough!(pouts)
Page 10
Action: A quick shot of valor girl and Brown Sugar in the larger bubble gum dispenser, Valor
girl's costume has match the colors and theme of Ring mistress put fit, her pupils white with a
black ring around them.
Dialogue:
Computer/Silver satin: Enslavement of Valor Girl complete...
Page 11:
Action: Pan over to Brown Sugar who is halfway there, unable to combat the take over of her
mind. Her costume slowly changing it's appearance as well.
Dialogue:
Computer/Silver satin: Enslavement of Brown sugar at 50%
Caption: To be continued...