"Forbidden Fantasy" - A Grime City Story

[Doctor Robo]

Thanks for the feedback, everyone. I'm having a lot of fun writing this story, and I'm glad to see that you all are having fun reading it!

In response to your comments so far:

Akonkid: Perhaps Jade subconsciously feels the need to show off her fine booty after it was properly reformatted by one of Sentius's robounits?

Leto17: One of the reasons I have enjoyed utilizing LISA in this story is because of exactly what she is: a robot who looks just like Ms. Metrobay. In my opinion, that's the best of both worlds!

Northern Chill: I haven't seen any of the Sailor Moon series, but I WAS inspired by Thor and Captain Marvel. Shazam!

Thanks again for the comments. Keep them coming!

- Doc

[Doctor Robo]

From the pages of MCcomix.com, Doctor Robo and Finister Foul proudly present “Forbidden Fantasy” chapter 8!

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Professor Gilbert Petto has a problem. His carelessness has allowed Cadet Crissy Tanner to meet his life-sized doll-slave “Mona”, who just happens to be a robotic clone of the superheroine Brown Sugar. Now that Crissy knows of Mona's existence, she has Gilbert in a bind. In return for her silence, Gilbert has promised to make a “Crissy” doll right on the spot, and now we get to see the sexy results!

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[nitpicker]

Will Headlights get a few more waitresses?

[mns_95125]

One plot thread in which a robot doll of Chrissy is created, with no inbuilt personality. Another plot thread in which a mind-swapping machine is constructed. And poor Chrissy in the middle with her hypnotically-enhanced desire to do whatever is necessary to become a robot. I think I can see where this is going...

[sohta123]

LOVING this storyline!
Hope to see some crossovers eventually with other characters on this site (Daredoll!).
Really really hope to see Silver Satin corrupted to the point she's leading the robot revolution! Also would love to see her experimenting on her ex-fellow heroines at that point in various manners.

Crissy Tanner's robot fetish/addiction is really hot too.

Great that these are weekly. Personally I'm ok with less content than more over a longer period of time if that's what it takes to keep getting them weekly. Wish some of the others did that as well.

Keep 'em coming.

[madcap]

I'm enjoying the story so far, but I have to admit I feel that things are moving a little slow. Here we are on chapter 8 and it still feels like we're in the prologue part of the story, just setting things up. There hasn't really been any serious mind control yet (mostly just brief moments, or characters that had already been enslaved in earlier stories, or fantasies), but I do have faith that some great MC moments are coming. But creating a robot double, or even swapping brains into the robot double, doesn't really do much for me on its own. I hope we see some good and proper mind control coming up in this story. I am enjoying seeing how Chrissie's fantasy is growing and becoming a major driving motivation for her.

Don't get me wrong, I am enjoying what's here, and I certainly expect that once it's all over and done with I'll appreciate the slow build-up a lot more (as I have in many of the other stories). But right now while waiting for each new chapter the slow pace is almost torture! (I would still rather you build things up slowly than rush though).

[Doctor Robo]

Sorry it has taken me so long to respond to your comments, but things have been a busy in Robo-land this week.

Nitpicker: Yes, but not in "Forbidden Fantasy". I'm saving that for a future story.

mns_95125: Perhaps, but I guess we'll have to wait and find out for sure!

sohta123: Thanks! We've had a few calls for more Silver Satin stories. I'm pleased to see that so many people enjoy that character and want to see more happen with (or to) her.

madcap: It's a catch-22. Do we take our time and make sure the story is told properly? Or do we rush through the setup and end up with a half-assed payoff? I have chosen the former, and it seems you agree that's the proper path to take.

Thanks again!
- Doc

[Doctor Robo]

From the pages of MCcomix.com, Doctor Robo and Finister Foul proudly present “Forbidden Fantasy” chapter 9!

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Jade Lightning and Crystal Cyclone are childhood friends who have traveled halfway across the world to fight crime as members of the elite Superheroine Squad. Jade has been around the block a few times, but Crystal is new in town and just getting her feet wet. Of course the streets of Metrobay aren’t the best place for a young heroine to learn the ropes, and Crystal will find out soon enough why they call the roughest part of town “Grime City”…

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[cvn88]

An enjoyable chapter - though I wonder how Crystal Cyclone could so quickly figure out who the blonde was (panel 13 I believe) while neither she nor Jade Lightning seemed to recognize the two officers who showed up at the end. (Being vague so as not to spoil for anyone who hasn't had a chance to read the chapter yet).

[sohta123]

Ms Tanner is smokin! Can't wait for more on her. Her attitude towards this seems so corruptive.
Hope to see the 'police force' increase in size.
Maybe there'll be a police vs robot war coming!

[Northern Chill]

I enjoyed this chapter quite a bit on many levels though I do have two quibbles:

1) When Crissy is whispering to Gilbert about putting her brain in the new doll, the text looks, well, smeared with the font used. I know most people aren't fussy about this kind of thing but it just struck me as deterring the overall appearance of the art in the panel.

2) I mentioned this over in Trishbot's Body Image thread but I'll bring it up here as well: I really think thrallium as a plot device needs to be, well, dialed back just a bit in usage. It looks great in art particularly when Finister and Akonkid depict it but I'm a little weary that every villain needs it...or seems to. There's nothing wrong with changing up the reaction (as mentioned elsewhere, different types of thrallium, different side effects or just different reactions).

A good chapter and looking forward to see where it goes from here....

[Doctor Robo]

From the pages of MCcomix.com, Doctor Robo and Finister Foul proudly present “Forbidden Fantasy” chapter 10!

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Imagine you were forced to switch bodies with a common street hooker, who was out on the town living things up while you rotted in jail with her face and criminal record. Now imagine that you might get your old body back, but your one chance lies in the hands of a reformed criminal genius who has never built this type of machine before. Think you’d be a little nervous? Well so is Valor Girl!

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[sohta123]

Episode 10 was great! Can't wait for episode 11.
Looks like L.I.S.A is 'helping' Crissy fulfill her dreams. And I'm hoping the Headlight Hotties are about to expand in numbers.
A larger 'police' force seems to be in order as well.

Keep it up!

[Doctor Robo]

From the pages of MCcomix.com, Doctor Robo and Finister Foul proudly present “Forbidden Fantasy” chapter 11!

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For a long while now Cadet Crissy Tanner has fantasized about what it would be like to have a robotic body, only to have her so-called friends turn down her pleas to help her live out her naughty dreams. Her desires are only inflamed by the existence of not one, but TWO sexy robot women in her very own workplace, but with a new machine online she just might be able to fulfill those fantasies after all!

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[Northern Chill]

An interesting chapter...Crissy gets to experience life in LISA's body and we get a peek at Ms. Metrobay's room (love the photos on display in the background). Looks like the police chief is in for a very special surprise indeed...

Looking forward to the next chapter!