Tony wrote:Some changes to the timeline that I'd like to see.
If the event is not in a story, then don't put a story in the stories column. It's confusing when the same title comes up multiple times.
If the story only covers part of the event, either as a memory or a time sequence, you might want to note that with something. (Maybe "partial", or "time shift")
I'd love to see where the story is available or the author/illustrator since I'm still having problems finding some of them.
You could also think about another table about characters. I'm trying to catch up and it's amazing just how many times Brown Sugar or Valiant Girl manage to get used! One of the columns for the new table would be something like "Times Taken" or "Times Controlled". Though in some stories, just about everyone ends up that way!
Tecknophyle wrote:I've tentatively added Prize Displays to the Chronology.
I've also added another category, for "Problem stories", that is stories which have some issues which currently don't allow them to be placed at the moment: these are Musk of the Mynx, Bedazzled, Wicked Fun Park, and To Love and Obey. The problem with the latter three stories emerge from Musk of the Mynx, specifically pages 3 and 12 with the appearance of Sgt/Lt Donovan.
Northern Chill wrote:Tecknophyle wrote:I've tentatively added Prize Displays to the Chronology.
I've also added another category, for "Problem stories", that is stories which have some issues which currently don't allow them to be placed at the moment: these are Musk of the Mynx, Bedazzled, Wicked Fun Park, and To Love and Obey. The problem with the latter three stories emerge from Musk of the Mynx, specifically pages 3 and 12 with the appearance of Sgt/Lt Donovan.
Bedazzled and Wicked Fun Park take place after Catatonic (Tamry O'Sullivan). As for the Donovan part, you can chalk that up to a creative typo on Fin's part and place Musk as if Donovan was referred to correctly.
Tecknophyle wrote:It gets back to the Resort/Musk problem. From a characterization standpoint, it makes sense for Resort to happen before Changing of the Guard, but Resort has to happen after Musk, but Musk has to happen after Changing. If it was some random Funhouse guard and not Donovan, then Musk can be placed before Changing and Resort. Then there's no problem with the other stories if that one problem was dealt with.
Doctor Robo wrote:Tecknophyle wrote:It gets back to the Resort/Musk problem. From a characterization standpoint, it makes sense for Resort to happen before Changing of the Guard, but Resort has to happen after Musk, but Musk has to happen after Changing. If it was some random Funhouse guard and not Donovan, then Musk can be placed before Changing and Resort. Then there's no problem with the other stories if that one problem was dealt with.
I guess I'm not following. Why does it make sense for Resort to take place before COTG?
mctek wrote:Ok, well Resort does happen after Change of the guard, at the time Me and Fin were doing Resort, Doc was doing FF , and in order to avoid spoilers in doc's story I had to leave out references to FF otherwise i would have put them in. So yes this does happen after Changing of the guard, and Fin probably goof when he was writing Erica's rank in Musk.
MCtek~
Tecknophyle wrote:Doctor Robo wrote:I guess I'm not following. Why does it make sense for Resort to take place before COTG?
Alpha Woman, chillin' at the resort, hanging out with the girls, having a grand old time...apparently not noticing that the love of her life abruptly and without reason cut all ties with her to be a guard at the Funhouse.
Tony wrote:There is an issue with Goldwing in the Chronology.
Goldwing is seen in character in Hostile Takeover and again Operation Resurrection though Night of the Drones. However, in Stripper Transformation, she and Knyght Fighter are last seen as Strippers.
PsiLance wrote:The placing of Resort Tales is not that big an issue really. Even if Kristen was gone, perhaps Tina thinks she's just busy. Never let it be said that the Squad is quick on the whole abduction thing.
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