Northern Chill wrote:A good chapter all in all. I kinda wish Sparrow's enslavement had been dragged out a bit more (an attempted escape or something like that) but the two heroines dressed as prison guards in the end made for a very enticing image. As for the second half, wow, Mechana is quite the, ummm, forward thinking fembot. Given her personality is partly composed of Ginger's and Ginger's jealousy led her down a decidedly wrong path, here's hoping Mechana doesn't make the same decisions.
Nice to see Crissy showing up...looks like that could make for interesting talk down the line.
Looking forward to seeing where the next chapter goes....
Akonkid wrote:Northern Chill wrote:A good chapter all in all. I kinda wish Sparrow's enslavement had been dragged out a bit more (an attempted escape or something like that) but the two heroines dressed as prison guards in the end made for a very enticing image. As for the second half, wow, Mechana is quite the, ummm, forward thinking fembot. Given her personality is partly composed of Ginger's and Ginger's jealousy led her down a decidedly wrong path, here's hoping Mechana doesn't make the same decisions.
Nice to see Crissy showing up...looks like that could make for interesting talk down the line.
Looking forward to seeing where the next chapter goes....
I think Mechana's "jealousy" isn't from Ginger, but rather from Valient Grrl and Belinda, both of whom have shown they're not exactly the easiest people to get along with sometimes. Ginger's personality traits were put into MilkMaid.
But, yeah, I agree. Swallow/Sparrow is absolutely adorable, and I was rather entertained at how she spent all that time bottomless, only to wind up like her partner. It's a shame she wasn't "tested" like Bluebird and Erica were, though. I enjoyed her cameo in Finister's Guardian Gals series; it's great to have a reporter in a city like Metrobay. She's exceptionally cute and I hope she's put to very good use in the future.
And poor Ted. The guy is trying so very hard to BREAK his "robo" fetish, only for MilkMaid, Mechana, and Crissy to constantly remind him of how easiest it would be. That man has far more willpower than I've got. On the other hand, I really enjoy how chummy he is with Silver Satin, and Marcy's behavior certainly remains compelling food for thought.
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